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The Opera of iNfantry
Ghosts..
lyrical hosts
floating
in a
chaotic coast
most
of them in need
bleeding breath
from death
dying of hunger
a starvation
even god can't feed..
Satan starts
to seem
appealing
through healing
while
stealing
their tongues...
But I
can still hear them
humming
looney lullabies
and
soft cries
in notes
of paramount
pleasure
A courts gesture
"immeasurable beats"
as we all
take a seat
and listen
The chior begins
and
their
sins
sound
magnificant
I call it
.
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.
.
.
.
The Opera of infantry...
lyrical hosts
floating
in a
chaotic coast
most
of them in need
bleeding breath
from death
dying of hunger
a starvation
even god can't feed..
Satan starts
to seem
appealing
through healing
while
stealing
their tongues...
But I
can still hear them
humming
looney lullabies
and
soft cries
in notes
of paramount
pleasure
A courts gesture
"immeasurable beats"
as we all
take a seat
and listen
The chior begins
and
their
sins
sound
magnificant
I call it
.
.
.
.
.
.
The Opera of infantry...
Published 14th Nov 2012
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15th Nov 2012 00:23am
"Dontcha salute
or follow in suit
tragedy
rides on the heals
of boots"
............Drivel
your comforting way of delivering
armageddon is quite disarming.
you got a certain something --- beauty infuses
everything you write....
or follow in suit
tragedy
rides on the heals
of boots"
............Drivel
your comforting way of delivering
armageddon is quite disarming.
you got a certain something --- beauty infuses
everything you write....
15th Nov 2012 4:32am
A completely irrelevant and tactless comment.
Comments/critique aren't here so you can say you simply do not like it. At least add a reason why you did it and offer critique where you think it's needed or else the time you took to read it and comment were sadly wasted.
I mean, I respect that you do not like it, you can't like everything, but that was unneeded.
Comments/critique aren't here so you can say you simply do not like it. At least add a reason why you did it and offer critique where you think it's needed or else the time you took to read it and comment were sadly wasted.
I mean, I respect that you do not like it, you can't like everything, but that was unneeded.
Anonymous
15th Nov 2012 4:52am
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15th Nov 2012 5:52am
Boo, I really adored this poem of yours, quite magnificent, lyrical and unique in a way few can understand. Your words are beautiful murmurs to my soul. Great job. Love it and what it stands for.
AlwaysCaliban
AlwaysCaliban
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Nov 2012 7:18am
15th Nov 2012 7:17am
I do love your poetry Devilish, I feel... unworthy to comment on it, but this.. i had too, forgive me, but this is exactly what I love, darkness, sinisterity, i feel i'm being dragged by the feet through your twisted psyche, lovely.. I need more.
15th Nov 2012 7:06pm
23rd Nov 2012 9:12am
I've read through quite a bit of your poetry, Devilish, and not only are you dark but you're sexy as all hell.
What a fascinating enchantress you are...
What a fascinating enchantress you are...
23rd Nov 2012 7:52pm
4th Dec 2012 11:23pm
I came to this write several times with something to say, which may have sounded contrary, but it wasn't-- and it really had nothing to do with what I thought of the write itself. I figured that it was just better to let be, and you just keep listening to what your heart tells you is right-- and I'll do the same.
Nor should it suggest that I didn't like the write, cause I did. More than a few finer brushed lines in this, and overall write was very well done indeed.
Uley
Nor should it suggest that I didn't like the write, cause I did. More than a few finer brushed lines in this, and overall write was very well done indeed.
Uley
22nd Oct 2013 3:53am
