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Some More Smoke.
Through the cloudy tears in my bloodshot eyes,
I can make out the fog that escapes my lungs.
Even if the room spins just a little bit, who cares?
Its what I need, if I choke it down I become myself.
My throat hates the burn, but my brain loves to swim.
The resin on my lips is just a sign I'm approachable again.
I get the feeling I need to sin again.
Besides, I will never be a saint.
I can make out the fog that escapes my lungs.
Even if the room spins just a little bit, who cares?
Its what I need, if I choke it down I become myself.
My throat hates the burn, but my brain loves to swim.
The resin on my lips is just a sign I'm approachable again.
I get the feeling I need to sin again.
Besides, I will never be a saint.
Published 5th Nov 2012
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5th Nov 2012 5:21am
sweet leaf.....I know it well. Or should I say it knows me. I've never met a saint either.:o)
5th Nov 2012 5:25am
5th Nov 2012 9:23am
Your writes are quite scary lately, but I can relate. I've been there and it's a dark place I still go sometimes. Definitely not a saint either, but none of us are, even the most perfect seeming people have dysfunctions and dark secrets.
As for your other poem, thinking you have no personality. Don't think too much on it. You have more personality than you and other people give you credit for. :)
Peace, Indie
As for your other poem, thinking you have no personality. Don't think too much on it. You have more personality than you and other people give you credit for. :)
Peace, Indie
5th Nov 2012 5:46pm
Thanks.. /:
For some reason, I have been sorta.. not my typical self lately.
For some reason, I have been sorta.. not my typical self lately.
5th Nov 2012 8:46pm
My throat hates the burn, but my brain loves to swim.
The resin on my lips is just a sign I'm approachable again.
i fuckin love that couplet! its the kinda thing we all wish we wrote, i can see im gunna have to keep my eye on u miss
- biff
x
The resin on my lips is just a sign I'm approachable again.
i fuckin love that couplet! its the kinda thing we all wish we wrote, i can see im gunna have to keep my eye on u miss
- biff
x
5th Nov 2012 9:44pm
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