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Don't Stop
She screams
in hysterical laughter
as I tickle her
unmercifully.
She nearly wets her pants
laughing so hard.
She turns over
and grabs my fingers
and pulls them over
to her mouth
and bites down hard.
I grab her arm
and roll her over
on her back.
She really fights me
finally and tells me to stop.
And then
she leans
into me
and kisses me
and tells me
that when she says
to stop
that I need to stop.
And then she sinks
into my arms
and kisses me
and lets me know
that she does not
want me to stop,
ever.
runningturtle87
in hysterical laughter
as I tickle her
unmercifully.
She nearly wets her pants
laughing so hard.
She turns over
and grabs my fingers
and pulls them over
to her mouth
and bites down hard.
I grab her arm
and roll her over
on her back.
She really fights me
finally and tells me to stop.
And then
she leans
into me
and kisses me
and tells me
that when she says
to stop
that I need to stop.
And then she sinks
into my arms
and kisses me
and lets me know
that she does not
want me to stop,
ever.
runningturtle87
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Re: Don't Stop
2nd Nov 2012 6:36am
A boisterous piece of love-play - their bedroom must be a lively place!
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2nd Nov 2012 10:51am
To me, working through an angle in a conversation is as erotic as it gets...anyone can have sex, but how many people can work right through a difficult moment without hurt feelings and a need to repair? The open ability to work directly on the relationship to me is very sexy and romantic: It means the relationship has taken precedence over an individual's ego and being right. When we can understand and allow and accept, we both win....not make up sex, but rather just....sex. No anger, but love under all circumstance, Magdalena. That is loving fun more than ANYTHING else.
Re: Don't Stop
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2012 10:06am
Love it, rt.
Strider
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re: Re: Don't Stop
2nd Nov 2012 10:55am
Yeah, we could fight, or we could just accept it and go on with the lovemaking, your choice.....and I hope you will just accept this boundary and not fight me on it.....That does not seem to be a hard concept to me, but humans fight about stupid shit all the time and waste their lovemaking time on what, Strider? Silly ego bullshit! I'm like, Yes Dear, let's keep kissing.....
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2nd Nov 2012 11:07am
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re: Re: Don't Stop
2nd Nov 2012 11:18am
I can listen to reason, mostly, but when love talks to me, I am all ears, mostly, Amanecio. Thanks.
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