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Devouring Satan/Finding God
Devouring Satan
I stepped Inside Satan lair.
I told him that I wanted his power.
I would become the greatest threat.
I would kill every fucking thing.
He laughed at me.
Told me that I was just a weak link.
I was just emotional-
So I slit his throat and stuffed his entrails inside of me.
Told his dying frame that I read both of their sides.
Neither interested me,
I just loved to kill.
And you were just not getting the job done fast enough.
The Holy Bible, The Satan's Handbook,
was fucking meaningless.
I just don’t give a fuck anymore.
I just want to kill everything.
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Finding God
So I found God--
He told me to repent all of my sins.
So I told of everyone I killed,
In every detailed way possible.
He cast me away.
Told me to speak with Satan.
I told him I ate him,
Took all his powers.
He backed slowly away.
Told the preacher man to put a cross on my forehead.
I just laughed.
Told him again, I killed everything.
Why would your cross bother me?
I devoured fucking Satan whole!
2012
I stepped Inside Satan lair.
I told him that I wanted his power.
I would become the greatest threat.
I would kill every fucking thing.
He laughed at me.
Told me that I was just a weak link.
I was just emotional-
So I slit his throat and stuffed his entrails inside of me.
Told his dying frame that I read both of their sides.
Neither interested me,
I just loved to kill.
And you were just not getting the job done fast enough.
The Holy Bible, The Satan's Handbook,
was fucking meaningless.
I just don’t give a fuck anymore.
I just want to kill everything.
-----
Finding God
So I found God--
He told me to repent all of my sins.
So I told of everyone I killed,
In every detailed way possible.
He cast me away.
Told me to speak with Satan.
I told him I ate him,
Took all his powers.
He backed slowly away.
Told the preacher man to put a cross on my forehead.
I just laughed.
Told him again, I killed everything.
Why would your cross bother me?
I devoured fucking Satan whole!
2012
Published 1st Nov 2012
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1st Nov 2012 6:45pm
So this is actually 2 poems in one. I fought myself over having them separate, but why? The title could either way. Basically, this is from a little project I started after the killer shot up people at the movies. So I wrote from both serial killer and victims view. Pretty clear what view these are from.
6th Nov 2012 12:27pm
Well this is interesting and odd...despite the odd thoughts, it flowed perfectly (which got me surprised). And although you say these are from views of killers, it really just sounds like your the killer. Guess that was what you wanted though. Overall, amazing poem, throws out a bunch of odd ideas...thoughtfulness...also makes me want to go kill someone...which I probably shouldn't do...I don't care...ah well...good poems...
6th Nov 2012 8:50pm
Thank you again :)
I wrote this as 2 different poems actually, no intention of having them together. They are one however.
I guess i'm going to have to rethink my theme with these poems because people seem to be confused by the killer/victim/me themes hmm.
Thanks for the kind words, not sure i want ya to kill people haha
I wrote this as 2 different poems actually, no intention of having them together. They are one however.
I guess i'm going to have to rethink my theme with these poems because people seem to be confused by the killer/victim/me themes hmm.
Thanks for the kind words, not sure i want ya to kill people haha
9th Nov 2012 1:34am
Oh fudge. A little too late on the not killing people thing. Whoops.
Plus I'm easily confused, so you might want better opinions than mine. I'm cRaZy.
Plus I'm easily confused, so you might want better opinions than mine. I'm cRaZy.
18th Sep 2013 6:15am
very interesting, i dont want to be too personal but id love some background info on what drove you to write this.. as ive had thought of going toe to toe with satan. ahah
