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The Game
You watch me dress,
knowing that
tonight
I do not belong to you.
I leave you full of thoughts;
his hands on my skin
caressing flesh
kissing trails
to anywhere he wants
as I indulge him.
Thoughts of his tongue
exploring hungrily
as I writhe and moan
in pleasure.
Knowing how my tongue
will twist around his shaft
as I take him in.
Wondering if I will
swallow
or tease him
leaving him
to plunge between my legs
every inch
I have aroused.
You will be incapable
of shaking from your mind
visions of me atop him
or the sounds you know I make.
You drown in doubt
as you entertain the thought
that he could out perform you.
Make me want him
again and again.
I will taste him as often as I want
and I will wear him home,
saturated in his sweat and his scent.
If you are lucky
I will allow you the chance
to kiss him from my skin.
To reclaim me as yours.
If I find you expectant,
I will deny you
even the opportunity
to relieve yourself
with your own hand
all the tension that built
imagining your sweet wife
fucking another man.
knowing that
tonight
I do not belong to you.
I leave you full of thoughts;
his hands on my skin
caressing flesh
kissing trails
to anywhere he wants
as I indulge him.
Thoughts of his tongue
exploring hungrily
as I writhe and moan
in pleasure.
Knowing how my tongue
will twist around his shaft
as I take him in.
Wondering if I will
swallow
or tease him
leaving him
to plunge between my legs
every inch
I have aroused.
You will be incapable
of shaking from your mind
visions of me atop him
or the sounds you know I make.
You drown in doubt
as you entertain the thought
that he could out perform you.
Make me want him
again and again.
I will taste him as often as I want
and I will wear him home,
saturated in his sweat and his scent.
If you are lucky
I will allow you the chance
to kiss him from my skin.
To reclaim me as yours.
If I find you expectant,
I will deny you
even the opportunity
to relieve yourself
with your own hand
all the tension that built
imagining your sweet wife
fucking another man.
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Re: The Game
Anonymous
25th Oct 2012 11:01pm
Honey,
Nice Game ; ). Loved your line:
"I will taste him as often as I want
and I will wear him home". Very visual and on top of things. Enjoyed your view.
tornado
Nice Game ; ). Loved your line:
"I will taste him as often as I want
and I will wear him home". Very visual and on top of things. Enjoyed your view.
tornado
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re: Re: The Game
26th Oct 2012 8:55am
Tornado,
It is a very nice game, thank you sweetheart. Glad you enjoyed it.
Honey <3
It is a very nice game, thank you sweetheart. Glad you enjoyed it.
Honey <3
Re: The Game
26th Oct 2012 2:08am
This may go down as a perfect definition of a certain kind of partner, maybe good for a textbook!
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re: Re: The Game
26th Oct 2012 8:57am
Ah, thank you! There are many more extreme versions of this kind of partner than I am. I cannot help but dote on and spoil my partners still. If that includes some sternness, so be it. I can give them what they wish for... in most cases. ;)
Thank you for reading, JAZZMANOR
Thank you for reading, JAZZMANOR
re: re: Re: The Game
26th Oct 2012 2:21pm
Oh not knowing if this was fictional or non, I didn't mean to imply one way or another if this was about you! I was actually thinking about the guy at home.
At any rate, you are welcome.
At any rate, you are welcome.
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Re: The Game
27th Oct 2012 1:49pm
Damn girl! I love this! I have written something similar called "Sinful Lovers' Game." I'd love for you to read it and tell me what you think. It's the same female dominant/male submissive kind of story. "i will wear him home" and "your sweet wife fucking another man" are golden lines.
I am excited to see what else you have to offer us, Honey.
Holly
I am excited to see what else you have to offer us, Honey.
Holly
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re: Re: The Game
27th Oct 2012 9:14pm
Thank you, Holly! Ours is not your typical dominant, submissive. In fact, we only dip our toes in really. It's more about the loss of control and the reclaiming of it. So hot! It's very multi layered and difficult to explain, and none of it matters to anyone but he and I. I fuck and he loves it. lol
I'll be sure to leave a comment on yours.
Thanks for reading sweetheart!
Honey <3
I'll be sure to leave a comment on yours.
Thanks for reading sweetheart!
Honey <3
Re: The Game
3rd Nov 2012 3:13am
"the sounds you know I make"
OMG I love that line!
This is beautifully sexy and definitely a unique perspective and breath of fresh air to DU erotica!
OMG I love that line!
This is beautifully sexy and definitely a unique perspective and breath of fresh air to DU erotica!
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Re: The Game
3rd Nov 2012 3:57pm
Yes, I believe knowing what I can do and imagining someone else getting to know what I can do is part of the excitement. I tried to make that a tangible thing in this poem. It is hard to show this perspective, as it is not well accepted and I thank you for the reception.
Thank you for reading sweetheart.
Honey <3
Thank you for reading sweetheart.
Honey <3
Re: The Game
11th Dec 2012 8:35am
Okay, so...there are parts of this I think are fuckin awesome & parts I might modify. Just small things. Uhhmm... phrasing, I guess. But the more I read this & think about your whole profile I keep asking myself...are you even real ? I mean, the picture is vague at best, could be anybody. You have no age, no links to reality. For all we know you could be a guy in his 40's pretending to be a hot housewife writing cuckhold poetry. Hhhmmmm...is it only me ?!
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re: Re: The Game
11th Dec 2012 11:18pm
It's true, I could be anyone. For that matter anyone here could be anyone. Making links for life outside of here doesn't make someone anymore real and there could be those who are so determined to fool people that they create ages and back stories and whatnot. Does making it more convincing make it true? This is one faucet of my life and it's anchor and expression is here. Not spending the time to attach links does not make it false, but I've no need to convince anyone. The vague is due to close mindedness and judgement I am wanting to avoid. Take what you will from my work. Ask questions and I will answer as best I can and always with honesty. I can assure you, I am real, but in the end even that is subject to what you are willing to believe without more proof. Ah well.
Anyway, thank you for the "fuckin awesome" and for taking the time to read.
Honey <3
Anyway, thank you for the "fuckin awesome" and for taking the time to read.
Honey <3
Re: The Game
11th Dec 2012 7:30pm
As a tease, you are on top of your game. Knowing that your partner enjoys both you and what you do (that doing this doesn't 'harm' him, but excites him to both his and your advantage), makes this an even more enjoyable and very erotic reading. Thank you sharing it with us.
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re: Re: The Game
12th Dec 2012 9:02am
Ah, someone who gets it! A welcome and very happy happening. Thank you, sir, for taking the time to read and to comment.
Honey <3
Honey <3
Re: The Game
Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 4:23am
Honey, will you wear me home?..haha
I don't care if your a 40 year old man pretending while writing cuckold poetry or 63 year old former nun looking to recapture her misspent youth. this is an excellent piece of erotic heat. I love the tease, the taunting, the denial..this is steamy! Gimme more...:)
I don't care if your a 40 year old man pretending while writing cuckold poetry or 63 year old former nun looking to recapture her misspent youth. this is an excellent piece of erotic heat. I love the tease, the taunting, the denial..this is steamy! Gimme more...:)
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Re. The Game
Anonymous
1st Feb 2022 11:17pm
Exquisite! X
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