Black Satin Sheets

This was written so uniquely.  I loved it, great write by two of my favorites!

Thank you for your comment Milky. I love seeing you here.

Holly

Pure poetry :)

Thank you Squib.

Nice!!! I like it, clever write. :)

Thank you for your comment flowergirl. I'm always happy to see a new face in my comment section.

Holly

Holly,

A very fun write! Thank you for letting me team up with you on this one.

tornado

You are so very welcome baby. Thank you! I had a lot of fun with this. We work/play well together. There is strong chemestry but I think you already know that. ;)

Holly

Nice duo :)

Thank you alicious.

Holly

Good, actually very good :)

I'm happy that you liked it, actually very happy Marek. :) Thank you for your comment.

Holly

nasty chylde....

sweet

Thank you for your comment.

Holly

Oh i was with you all every step of the way. This was awesome. The was great.

Thank you P.S. We enjoyed writing for you all to read.

Holly

Awesome poem.
Awesome combo.

Gurudev

Awesome comment.
Thank you. ;)

Holly

I like your subtle and sensual use of words as well as the poetic format. Nice concept, well done!

Thank you.

Holly

I love this poem because the flow is simply amazing.

Thank you very much.

Holly

The imagery is stunning~

Thank you. I try. :)

Holly

Wow that was a Great duet sweets!
Well written!!


Sir Lancelott

Thank you Lance. We had fun with it.

Holly

Slide by sometime

Will do.

Holly

Just re-read all eight again. It's hard to pick a favorite; collectively your work is so quality, it's like a beloved album you want to listen to again and again. Each piece though has such a strong identity and never fails to please. I think this one may be one of my favorites. Although it's the least extreme, it evokes extremely erotic imagery. For me, two lovers fucking each other, silhouetted against the moonlight. I hear waves crashing outside the open wonder, see curtains flowing. The scene is serene and sultry at once. The structure is atypical from how you usually write and it works so well with the theme. And of course hats off to tornado as well, this collab is divine!

Thank you very much, Murderotica. You're comments are so thoughtful. Tornado and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Holly

This is really gorgeous - thanks for sharing. Have you read anything by Adrienne Rich? This reminds me in a way of "The Floating Poem, Unnumbered". Here's a sample:

Whatever happens with us, your body
will haunt mine—tender, delicate
your lovemaking, like the half-curled frond
of the fiddlehead fern in forests
just washed by sun. Your traveled, generous thighs
between which my whole face has come and come—
the innocence and wisdom of the place my tongue has found there

I've never heard of Adrienne Rich. Thanks for your comment though.

-Holly

Clever writing and a fun read overall.  The imagery here works so well to move the story forward.  I love the little details you include that really make this piece work.  I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you, Howlin_Wolf. 'Tornado' gets half the credit on this one as well though.

-Holly