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Nothing But A Blur
Broken is the girl,
Who kneels before your feet,
Your power over her,
Is strong and makes her
weep.
She follows you around,
Like your little servant girl,
And you don't even realize the
Pain you've inflicted in her world.
You have her to yourself,
Yet she's not enough for you,
She tries and tries so hard,
But there's nothing in the world she
can do.
This girl who was once,
Just as strong as you,
Is breaking more each day,
Because you're such a damn fool.
Before you can even realize,
All that you've done to her,
She'll be dead by tonight,
Her memory to you will be nothing
but a blur.
Who kneels before your feet,
Your power over her,
Is strong and makes her
weep.
She follows you around,
Like your little servant girl,
And you don't even realize the
Pain you've inflicted in her world.
You have her to yourself,
Yet she's not enough for you,
She tries and tries so hard,
But there's nothing in the world she
can do.
This girl who was once,
Just as strong as you,
Is breaking more each day,
Because you're such a damn fool.
Before you can even realize,
All that you've done to her,
She'll be dead by tonight,
Her memory to you will be nothing
but a blur.
Published 24th Oct 2012
| Edited 12th Nov 2012
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15th Nov 2012 3:39pm
Sad, beautiful and oppressive.
I like the way you express and tell a story.
It's so relateable.
I especially like:
This girl who was once,
Just as strong as you,
Is breaking more each day,
Because you're such a damn fool
Very nice poem!
I like the way you express and tell a story.
It's so relateable.
I especially like:
This girl who was once,
Just as strong as you,
Is breaking more each day,
Because you're such a damn fool
Very nice poem!
11th Jan 2013 4:28pm
