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dada* & mama** do thee fuckaround
byDaKozaSunOc212012at11:06pm+pixtr ·
*('dada' isnot my father)
**('mama' is no bodysmother)
Dada + Mama was a fuckin'round
in th'at once'pon tyme y'done
heard a bout
(they's) tryin t'make a sin'cere
st ate me nt
wit a
series of squirts & quivers.....
like-it-was-like
to've been a prof'ound
deprocreation (of
s o r t s ) thus creating
a process [of] professional
disprocreantism
&wee, wee popped (like c o r n) wee
popped-out realike s u r real
yes, wee popped wee popped wee squirted
wee quiver'd until
A Sense
[of] noSense reversed
all It's Own
deceptives
vvvvvvvvvvdkzk21octo2012vvvvvvvvvv
*('dada' isnot my father)
**('mama' is no bodysmother)
Dada + Mama was a fuckin'round
in th'at once'pon tyme y'done
heard a bout
(they's) tryin t'make a sin'cere
st ate me nt
wit a
series of squirts & quivers.....
like-it-was-like
to've been a prof'ound
deprocreation (of
s o r t s ) thus creating
a process [of] professional
disprocreantism
&wee, wee popped (like c o r n) wee
popped-out realike s u r real
yes, wee popped wee popped wee squirted
wee quiver'd until
A Sense
[of] noSense reversed
all It's Own
deceptives
vvvvvvvvvvdkzk21octo2012vvvvvvvvvv
Published 22nd Oct 2012
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27th Oct 2012 6:04am
always a mindfuck, your style is hard to read yet i can't stop reading, esp. once i started to find the rythyms and meanings, diggin this one
much'preciate ye takin the time to read these things. you'll notice that for the volume of stuff i've posted here(DUP), veryvery few are willing (?able?) to comment.
mindfuck? well, only if viewed thru the narrow perception-peephole that we've all been conditioned to use to guard our delusion of Real World / Real Life / Reality......
Art should challenge the perceptions of both your audience & yourSelf.
If you're (consciously or not) trying to "please" the crowd, or play TO their egos, (to embellish your own - which is what happens on sites like this), or in hope of 'being paid', then you're a 'craft' person, which is okay if your doing wit a conscious 'awareness' of it & not tryin to pawn yrself off as Deep, but so what?
there are some artists who can be both challenging & profitable, (BEFORE they're Dead). Bukowski, Picasso, Dylan, Warhol, Miles Davis, Beatles, Coltrane, Allen Ginsberg, to name a few, but that usually only happens 'accidentally'. the vast majority of 'challenging' artists will only reap obscurity,madness,&/or the insanity& personal demise of addiction/alcohol, that is if they allow their Egos to stay 'unAccepting', & keep clinging to eXpectations of somekinda silly Glory.
enough blabber....just write on, & see what does or doesn't happen
mindfuck? well, only if viewed thru the narrow perception-peephole that we've all been conditioned to use to guard our delusion of Real World / Real Life / Reality......
Art should challenge the perceptions of both your audience & yourSelf.
If you're (consciously or not) trying to "please" the crowd, or play TO their egos, (to embellish your own - which is what happens on sites like this), or in hope of 'being paid', then you're a 'craft' person, which is okay if your doing wit a conscious 'awareness' of it & not tryin to pawn yrself off as Deep, but so what?
there are some artists who can be both challenging & profitable, (BEFORE they're Dead). Bukowski, Picasso, Dylan, Warhol, Miles Davis, Beatles, Coltrane, Allen Ginsberg, to name a few, but that usually only happens 'accidentally'. the vast majority of 'challenging' artists will only reap obscurity,madness,&/or the insanity& personal demise of addiction/alcohol, that is if they allow their Egos to stay 'unAccepting', & keep clinging to eXpectations of somekinda silly Glory.
enough blabber....just write on, & see what does or doesn't happen
