Blissignorant

Not that rhyming is necessarily a bad thing but it's good to see you break from the rhyme scheme every now and then. But what's up with the formation of the verses in your poems? They look nice and neat or formed to look a certain way. Let me guess; you're either anal retentive or a control freak, or maybe even both? Am I right?  

I appreciate your feedback and the fact that you read me on a regular basis, but, who are you, some sort of phycology student or something? I checked out your profile and based on what you've posted, you're certainly not a poet, or so it appears; at least not yet anyway. However, if you're a practicing shrink, gimme your credentials and I'll critique you, Ok? Or maybe you should work on educating yourself and I'll work on my poetry...fair enough?

Jeez! I didn't mean to offend you! I was only playing with your head. I actually love how you make  many of your poems appealing just to look at, as well as reading them.

No worries, I didn't take offence at all. I guess I was just fucking with your head too(anyone for sloppy seconds?) Oh, and thanks for the compliments. Perhaps my poems are pleasing to the eye but I think you get more out of a poem when you actually read it...

Hey Mike, I think you'd get more comments if you didn't dissect each one!  

??? How am I suppose to reply to her comment? Besides, she knows I'm just playing. It's all good...no one's feelings were harmed in this write.