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The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
Die withered old heart
just die
I have no use
for you anymore
your the same heart that
let me get on the trust bus
that took me to let down street
the heart that drowned out my instinct
the heart that fell
for the beautiful liar
die already
pathetic fool
I'd kill ya if I could
your embedded deep in my psyche
I think ugly thoughts to keep the heart at bay
yet I hear it, singing its song of hope
I mentally vomit,
a broken fucked up heart
is like shrapnel of the soul
traveling about trying to ruin everything
again.
just die
I have no use
for you anymore
your the same heart that
let me get on the trust bus
that took me to let down street
the heart that drowned out my instinct
the heart that fell
for the beautiful liar
die already
pathetic fool
I'd kill ya if I could
your embedded deep in my psyche
I think ugly thoughts to keep the heart at bay
yet I hear it, singing its song of hope
I mentally vomit,
a broken fucked up heart
is like shrapnel of the soul
traveling about trying to ruin everything
again.
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Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 4:44pm
Fantastic image's nikki sounds very personel great write i really like the "trust bus" great line.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
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re: Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 4:47pm
thanks dude!
much appreciated!
i used that line in a conversation the other day and had to put it to paper!
much appreciated!
i used that line in a conversation the other day and had to put it to paper!
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 4:59pm
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16th Oct 2012 5:01pm
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 5:03pm
The entire write is awesome but that 5th stanza... so descriptive, holy crap. I could reread it until my eyes bleed and still want to read it again.
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re: Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 5:05pm
wow!!! thank you so much!!!
you make me blush! :)
super compliment thanks again!
you make me blush! :)
super compliment thanks again!
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 5:38pm
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16th Oct 2012 6:47pm
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 6:38pm
Nikki!!!!! words torn one by one from my own being, wow I'm sitting writing this in total awe! think I just stepped on my jaw, then realised my whole self was on the flaw.
outstanding
outstanding
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re: Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 6:47pm
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 7:27pm
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 8:00pm
Jeeeeez,
every time I lift, you equally drop ---
wicked words of wisdom Nikkeeee.......
nice ugly stuff....
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re: Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
16th Oct 2012 8:17pm
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
17th Oct 2012 6:52am
The last stanza with the shrapnel was a proper ball squeezer.
Probably the best writing I've seen from you.
Probably the best writing I've seen from you.
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re: Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
17th Oct 2012 5:04pm
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
18th Oct 2012 12:22pm
cannot say much more than enjoyable read - really like the line "I mentally vomit"
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18th Oct 2012 2:20pm
Re: The Slow Death of An Already Broken Heart
18th Oct 2012 5:28pm
I like that there is hope in you and trusting and loving again...Always give Love another chance till you meet your soul mate.
Thank you for sharing this bittersweet, but lovely poem.
Thank you for sharing this bittersweet, but lovely poem.
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