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Unbound
A world created of unbound design
Composed of light and exquisite sound
A melodic symphony from a far distant land
Grandeur unearthed in dune swept sands
Surging kissed waves of sea on shore
Our primal rhythm stirs then soars
Seductively probing milky thighs
Moist sweet honey begins to thrive
Captive to his Neptunian dance
Back arching lost in a sensual trance
Wind swept hair in a balmy breeze
As his tongue glides toward ecstasy
As night shadows a sultry sea
Lips of heated breath cover thee
A wave of passion engulfs his frame
Now paralyzed within my erotic dream
Circling about his rock-hard shaft
Pre-cum yet poignantly compelling back
Pressure mounting by rapturous thoughts
Harmony swelling toward a primordial lot
Thighs tensing with every stroke
As blood boils within my throat
Heavy breathed now rapturous lust
To a sublime offering of an innate art
Ancestral Haliae, nymph or muse
Awareness dissipating cognitively fused
An euphoric prelude to an rhapsodic tide
A world created of unbound design
Published 16th Oct 2012
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16th Oct 2012 4:53pm
17th Oct 2012 4:44pm
It was sweet of you to join here in order to leave a comment on my account. Now you'll have to share a few poems of your own, which I know you have, so I can kindly do the same ... Hoping your day shines!
16th Oct 2012 11:41pm
17th Oct 2012 4:39pm
Thank you for taking time to read the poem & sharing your thoughts lunabella!
20th Oct 2012 8:35pm
The images this conjures up in my head are from Greek myths, especially Jason and the Argonauts.
Welcome to DU
Welcome to DU
22nd Oct 2012 5:52am
22nd Oct 2012 10:28pm
24th Oct 2012 5:58pm
Although you categorized this poem as erotic, I did not find it vulgar as other poets write theirs. These are subtle hints of sex done in an erotically poetic way...well done!
Hope to read more from you...
Hope to read more from you...
14th Nov 2012 6:07am
Artistic, poetic and expressive it creates a mood that's erotic without being crude sexy without being lewd.
Bless you.
The Cat
Bless you.
The Cat
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24th Dec 2021 2:34am
First time back in over 9 yrs so I truly appreciate your time in commenting on this very old poem!
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