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Baby You Blow My Mind
I held you in my arms today
and all my worries
fled away
your lips embraced
my love
until
I found your pleasure
and twisted
it
wild flames
erupted
passion screaming from
your sighs
but muted lest
some passer by
ruin
the secret
of our joy
trembling anticipation
exploding into
pure elation
unfettered
flying
dreaming
driving
baby you blow my mind.
and all my worries
fled away
your lips embraced
my love
until
I found your pleasure
and twisted
it
wild flames
erupted
passion screaming from
your sighs
but muted lest
some passer by
ruin
the secret
of our joy
trembling anticipation
exploding into
pure elation
unfettered
flying
dreaming
driving
baby you blow my mind.
Published 14th Oct 2012
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
14th Oct 2012 3:32am
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14th Oct 2012 5:18pm
It think "this is exciting" is as fine a compliment as a poem of this nature could recieve, Thx Lily_Mae....
15th Oct 2012 8:31am
15th Oct 2012 6:36pm
