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Numbness, Come
Dazed.
My thoughts are shouting,
But so far away now.
I frown
At the car keys.
Where to?
I stare, unseeing, at the dashboard.
The muted rushing in my ears
Is getting louder.
There is not much time until
Impractical sobs
Tear their way out.
So, come, numbness.
Say nothing to me
For a while longer.
My thoughts are shouting,
But so far away now.
I frown
At the car keys.
Where to?
I stare, unseeing, at the dashboard.
The muted rushing in my ears
Is getting louder.
There is not much time until
Impractical sobs
Tear their way out.
So, come, numbness.
Say nothing to me
For a while longer.
Published 11th Oct 2012
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11th Oct 2012 12:13pm
A lovelly write my dear, I really relate to the line " i frown at the car keys where to? i know how that feels
Fantastic stuff
cheers
Marcus (Zenith)
Fantastic stuff
cheers
Marcus (Zenith)
11th Oct 2012 12:30pm
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11th Oct 2012 12:33pm
Thanks, Magdalena! I didn't think about others relating, but now you mention it... I fall in that trap, sometimes, where I forget the emotion is not solely mine.
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12th Oct 2012 3:17pm
Hi there, Drivelicious. Thanks for stopping by.
I'll be stopping by your poems to have a look.
I'll be stopping by your poems to have a look.
