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A Sad Moment
I look at the church
with it's glorious steeple;
I open the door
and see all the sheep
sitting up straight
all neat in their rows;
with the wolf at his pulpit
I stand there and weep.
with it's glorious steeple;
I open the door
and see all the sheep
sitting up straight
all neat in their rows;
with the wolf at his pulpit
I stand there and weep.
Published 10th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
13th Oct 2012 7:40am
Hey hey,
Welcome to DU!
Nice stuff. Short with a punch and solid point of view. Solid in its delivery.
Keep writing, you going to do well here.
Al .
Welcome to DU!
Nice stuff. Short with a punch and solid point of view. Solid in its delivery.
Keep writing, you going to do well here.
Al .
13th Oct 2012 8:37pm
Thank you. This is my first time showing my work to those other than close friends and family. I'm still nervous about it, but figured it was about time. Thank you for the comment and encouragement
Anonymous
13th Oct 2012 10:54pm
Yeah, we all had that.
You'll be fine, just keep writing.
;]
You'll be fine, just keep writing.
;]
