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unDerdeepGround'round(aPremedicatedEpitath)
time't stop fcknround
groundeep roundround stop'being
thee write-silly egoVib'rant
disconsciousness'o'Self,dearSelf
nomore wwwwwordpixtrs nomore
joyfulnoyze thru horn nor hardon [ s]
in
struments c'puters eyecamera eyes
all alookin at thee sea deep sea bottom sea,
cause'a'like thee RealPoets(f'lackaBetterword)
are
deadeepUnderground dead & even they was stonedrunk
phony fakirs'd'Ego mosta lotta times,like even
even th'best-of-'em my beloved hero wordwankers(ye
knows eye'm only teasin[font=Georgia] ye, yknow?)
[let]thee games've began,begetting hubris-displacin'-honor,
compounded by & for each generation
from po'try competition/forum deedumbdumb to Our
sick dlusion money'democrazy ElectionYearSuicidePride
i, as-was-a-Me,(o,br'illiant fcknHeartSoul) don't seems t'live
h'ere
anymore since a dozen years n'ow...th'children went gone
wit all them other realHumanbeans & such is left of left-behind,
left-for-dead, for alla that fine whatever wee crave+rave a
bout, brayin&bellerin'prayering t'Our Golden Ass of worship
all p a i n s misgiven/forgotten wit thee 'bestMoments'
of Untenable Human Livings, too old t'be young/touched,
but never to young to disappear to disappear[/font]
^^^^^^^^^^^dkzkOct2012>>>>>>[all
characters in this wordplay are highly fictive]
~fotografique originale d'dkzk2011~
groundeep roundround stop'being
thee write-silly egoVib'rant
disconsciousness'o'Self,dearSelf
nomore wwwwwordpixtrs nomore
joyfulnoyze thru horn nor hardon [ s]
in
struments c'puters eyecamera eyes
all alookin at thee sea deep sea bottom sea,
cause'a'like thee RealPoets(f'lackaBetterword)
are
deadeepUnderground dead & even they was stonedrunk
phony fakirs'd'Ego mosta lotta times,like even
even th'best-of-'em my beloved hero wordwankers(ye
knows eye'm only teasin[font=Georgia] ye, yknow?)
[let]thee games've began,begetting hubris-displacin'-honor,
compounded by & for each generation
from po'try competition/forum deedumbdumb to Our
sick dlusion money'democrazy ElectionYearSuicidePride
i, as-was-a-Me,(o,br'illiant fcknHeartSoul) don't seems t'live
h'ere
anymore since a dozen years n'ow...th'children went gone
wit all them other realHumanbeans & such is left of left-behind,
left-for-dead, for alla that fine whatever wee crave+rave a
bout, brayin&bellerin'prayering t'Our Golden Ass of worship
all p a i n s misgiven/forgotten wit thee 'bestMoments'
of Untenable Human Livings, too old t'be young/touched,
but never to young to disappear to disappear[/font]
^^^^^^^^^^^dkzkOct2012>>>>>>[all
characters in this wordplay are highly fictive]
~fotografique originale d'dkzk2011~
Published 8th Oct 2012
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8th Oct 2012 11:10pm
9th Oct 2012 1:44am
10th Oct 2012 7:49pm
Dude, the way you wrote this is absolutely genius i think i found connections you probably didn't yourself! :D beautiful poem....please feedback on mine
thanks!
thanks!
10th Oct 2012 9:18pm
whoa...thank ye pal...
yes, all this stuff 99.8% spontaneous, & rarely, if ever, changed other than maybe 1-2 words...
yes,yes...eye hope that those of you who are able to read & acknowledge these missives will indeed 'find things' in there that (what's-left-of) "I" was not conscious of.......
muchas gracias!!
yes, all this stuff 99.8% spontaneous, & rarely, if ever, changed other than maybe 1-2 words...
yes,yes...eye hope that those of you who are able to read & acknowledge these missives will indeed 'find things' in there that (what's-left-of) "I" was not conscious of.......
muchas gracias!!
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2012 8:21pm
14th Oct 2012 8:16pm
Now dis is pootry. I unerstandis purrfectlee
Goo job I was ennertaned da hole time
Goo job I was ennertaned da hole time
15th Oct 2012 2:45am
grazie, daddyo.....
glad ye
could pull a bit
of a'muse(ment)
outta this missssssive
write/wright/rite/right On & on
glad ye
could pull a bit
of a'muse(ment)
outta this missssssive
write/wright/rite/right On & on
