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Infinite compassion
A deliberate distraction
To a life unfullfilled
A sunken dream forever sealed
In a depiction it shall be revealed
A treasure unearthed, healed the curse.
A deliberate distraction
To a life unfullfilled
A sunken dream forever sealed
In a depiction it shall be revealed
A treasure unearthed, healed the curse.
Published 15th May 2010
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15th May 2010 9:39pm
I love this poem, it's like a little post-it-note thought. I think of it as a conclusive reflection on a broken dream. Although short in words, it is perfectly concise - the words you have chosen say everything.
Although the poem says things like 'life unfulfilled' and 'sunken dreams' I don't feel any negativity from the words, it feels positively cathartic.
Eloquent writing from an eloquent author.
Although the poem says things like 'life unfulfilled' and 'sunken dreams' I don't feel any negativity from the words, it feels positively cathartic.
Eloquent writing from an eloquent author.
15th May 2010 9:58pm
he he..im glad you love it. I wrote it some time ago and found it on the back of my college notebook. Thought I'd submit it.
Yes your right its not negative, its about meeting the love of my life after six years. Was so in love, now we are friends still, still havent told the way i feel. cant..lol words just dont come out..so i write them.
he he...
really happy you liked it.
Yes your right its not negative, its about meeting the love of my life after six years. Was so in love, now we are friends still, still havent told the way i feel. cant..lol words just dont come out..so i write them.
he he...
really happy you liked it.
