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Sorrow Lilly's
I have a sorrow
deep within
It begins with love
and ends in sin
Rooted from
my scars of old
It's seeds are soft,
or so I'm told
So soft it seems
I blanket it
Cradled with me,
full of shit
I watch it bloom
and grow in need
Possessing wounded thoughts,
it feeds
To plant the buds
of mourning lilly's
Weeping crimson
just as gypsies
Sprouting darkness
just for me
Embraced by thorns
forever in eternity
deep within
It begins with love
and ends in sin
Rooted from
my scars of old
It's seeds are soft,
or so I'm told
So soft it seems
I blanket it
Cradled with me,
full of shit
I watch it bloom
and grow in need
Possessing wounded thoughts,
it feeds
To plant the buds
of mourning lilly's
Weeping crimson
just as gypsies
Sprouting darkness
just for me
Embraced by thorns
forever in eternity
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re: Re: Sorrow Lilly's
8th Oct 2012 5:12pm
Yes just as the poem indicates, your very welcome dear. Thank you for your time.
Re: Sorrow Lilly's
6th Oct 2012 11:13pm
"I have a sorrow deep within It begins with love
and ends in sin Rooted from my scars of old"
"I blanket it Cradled with me, full of shit I watch it bloom and grow in need Possessing wounded thoughts, it feeds"
These lines touched me, left me feeling very soft, and open to you; something honest, almost confessional in this piece. Thank you kourtnissixxx.
and ends in sin Rooted from my scars of old"
"I blanket it Cradled with me, full of shit I watch it bloom and grow in need Possessing wounded thoughts, it feeds"
These lines touched me, left me feeling very soft, and open to you; something honest, almost confessional in this piece. Thank you kourtnissixxx.
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re: Re: Sorrow Lilly's
8th Oct 2012 5:13pm
I'm glad it could bring forth such emotion. Your very welcome hun. Thank you for your in depth analysis.
Re: Sorrow Lilly's
7th Oct 2012 00:01am
Re: Sorrow Lilly's
7th Oct 2012 00:01am
Very solemn and pretty. I enjoyed this, good job. It's very unique.
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re: Re: Sorrow Lilly's
8th Oct 2012 5:14pm
Thank you very much hun, I'm honored one such as yourself enjoyed it and found it unique.
Re: Sorrow Lilly's
7th Oct 2012 3:22am
There's so much deep pain inside this poem. It was a beautiful poem beautiful.
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8th Oct 2012 5:15pm
Re: Sorrow Lilly's
7th Oct 2012 4:04am
re: Re: Sorrow Lilly's
8th Oct 2012 5:16pm
Thank you bradley, I've come to look forward to your comments my friend.