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Concerning Beauty
The funny thing about girls these days
A strange obsession of appearances
They think that the tanner they are
The closer they are to perfect
Well the truth is
Beauty is not only looks
A beautiful girl is beautiful
by herself, not with the changes she took
For me, true beauty is body, mind and the soul
Not some girl who looks like burnt meat
I have known many girls with a lot of curves
and they are more beautiful than celebrities
In summary, girls with looks
Yet are spoiled rotten
Are uglier than
The sweet beautiful girls who are forgotten
A strange obsession of appearances
They think that the tanner they are
The closer they are to perfect
Well the truth is
Beauty is not only looks
A beautiful girl is beautiful
by herself, not with the changes she took
For me, true beauty is body, mind and the soul
Not some girl who looks like burnt meat
I have known many girls with a lot of curves
and they are more beautiful than celebrities
In summary, girls with looks
Yet are spoiled rotten
Are uglier than
The sweet beautiful girls who are forgotten
Written by
siphondarkness
(Levi)
Published 6th Oct 2012
| Edited 8th Oct 2012
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Re: Concerning Beauty
6th Oct 2012 7:21pm
Awww. That is wonderful. It would be nice if everyone felt this way. Beauty does come from the inside.
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6th Oct 2012 10:31pm
The fifth to ninth lines would sum up my own idea of beauty in a woman - a wholistic one.
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Re: Concerning Beauty
7th Oct 2012 6:26am
"Human beauty should not be determined by looks, but by the way you interact with others" A quote by moi :).
I loved this poem and the message behind it
I loved this poem and the message behind it
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10th Oct 2012 8:51pm
I love every line in this, I've grow to admire your darker poetry recently yet this is simply breathe taking. To be vain is so over rated and quite to common for my taste. natural beauty is all that matters as you have so skillfully penned (typed)
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10th Oct 2012 8:53pm