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my life
this is my explination
this is my life
i try
i try
i try
i try
yet i never seem to escape it
no matter how hard
no matter how much effort
i always fall
i always fail
and honestly i question myself
why do u keep on living
why do u try so hard
i have doubts
i have flaws
i am fucked up
i am insane
but i fight every day
maybe one day i'll just say fuck it
but until that day i just keep pushing it
i keep on living this sick hollow twisted life
this is my way
this is my life
this is my life
i try
i try
i try
i try
yet i never seem to escape it
no matter how hard
no matter how much effort
i always fall
i always fail
and honestly i question myself
why do u keep on living
why do u try so hard
i have doubts
i have flaws
i am fucked up
i am insane
but i fight every day
maybe one day i'll just say fuck it
but until that day i just keep pushing it
i keep on living this sick hollow twisted life
this is my way
this is my life
Published 2nd Oct 2012
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2nd Oct 2012 4:12am
Deep and full of emotion and GOOD. Is this how you are feeling or was this a passing moment? You don't have to answer, it is just me trying to place where these words struck you and how they came about. Have a good day :)
2nd Oct 2012 4:42am
i dont mind answering its life no its something i constantly live with and struggle with it each day but i fight it each day i cant just give up
3rd Oct 2012 4:13am
Well kudos for you for not giving up. This way, you can win a battle everyday, no matter what else it seems you may lose. You will have a win no matter what :)
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