CAGED

I also wrote this 10 years ago when I was 14 around the same time I formed words to add to the lullaby Row,row,row,your boat.In a vary morbid and dire way this poem caged is also a poem/song I made up it's in my past,and from long ago.

I understand this write.... after loosing someone dear to me the turmoil was just too much but i started writing to express my pain and as the ink oozed upon the paper the pain seeped from my inners....i hope you use this wonderful medium in the same way i did and that you find some peace...plz remember how lucky you are to have the skill of expression with such grand results.... good luck and i shall remember this write...tyvm

Thank you I'm vary sorry for your loss of your loved one.I know how that feels.I will take care.I hope you do the same and,realize how talented you are in expressing yourself it is truly a gift.Words have power mine do.So do yours remember that.Most of my morbid poems were written in my teen yrs.I had a hard life.My life is better now.Everyone who is deserving of good karma will have a good life.You choose to live right,do right by others it will come.Don't lose sight of that or give up.We have to earn it and persevere to get it.  

thank you for such a lovely reply... I'm grinning, you're so kind. I so understand the karma comment, i detest flys but can't even kill one of them, just because of my views on life. its too precious...thank you white rabbit

your welcome synthetic 1. I'm glad to have made you smile/grin.I enjoy seeing others happy and knowing some of what I say has a positive effect to those deserving.I think you are a really nice person,even tho I don't really know you I sense it.fly's are annoying they buzz around your head and irritate you but they have a purpose and are important too.Their life span is vary short.They thrive on the things that have died lay their eggs and kill infection. Ants contribute they clean up the mess and prosper on it's flesh,after a animal has taken what it needs to survive,and feed its young just as we do.Fly's and ants step in afterwards.I know it sounds gross but it's a fact of life  and your right it is vary precious in every aspect in this world.Nothing about it is trivial.I hope none of this makes you too squeamish I sometime have a extrinsic way of putting things and I am vary blunt.I am just glad to know my poems are now being read and to have someone respond to them is more than I hoped for thank you for reading them.  

Flies and ants, like wolves and starfish are Mother Nature's vacuum cleaners.

I agree