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" A Mind of Their Own "
I still remember
The very first time
You put your mouth on my pussy
Hungerly
You dined
For hours down there
I wonder if you were even aware
Of how many times I came
Of how many times I cried out your name
It was such a sweet surprise
And what made it more so
Was how many times your eyes
Caught mine
It sent something through me
Every time...
I still remember
How tightly
I held onto your hair
And I didn't ever
Want to let go
And it seemed like
My hips
Had a mine of their own
I really don't know
How you'd get it so right
To have me winding
Then grinding
Uncontrollably...
And I'll never
Be able to forget
When you rolled us over
And I was on top
Hunching
Your lips
And I couldn't stop
My hips
Have a mind of their own
And incredibly
I cum again
Saturating
Your mouth with my sweet juices again...
I remember it
Like it was yesterday
How at first we
Innocently
Flirted laughed and played
Then we touched
Melding together
And we kissed
And you made sure not to miss
One inch of me
And yes you've made me this way
How my legs spread
Most eagerly
To be caressed
By you
And when you pressed
Your lips and tongue
Down there
Where
It's aching
For you
First time I ever cried
Not caring
If anybody heard
And first time
I was ever
Completely
Satisfied
And this I'll never be able to deny
With just your lips
Down there
Trust me
Nothing
Can ever compare
So when you come home to me
After being gone
For far too long
It shouldn't be a wonder
That my legs spread
All too easily
Anxiously
Wanting
Needing
Your head
Baby intensely
I can't help anticipating
It going down
To my pussy
Bringing
This fierce need
For this
Your touch your kiss
Them lips
Yes you've made my hips
Have a mind of their own...
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Written on 7-11-12 by LL
The very first time
You put your mouth on my pussy
Hungerly
You dined
For hours down there
I wonder if you were even aware
Of how many times I came
Of how many times I cried out your name
It was such a sweet surprise
And what made it more so
Was how many times your eyes
Caught mine
It sent something through me
Every time...
I still remember
How tightly
I held onto your hair
And I didn't ever
Want to let go
And it seemed like
My hips
Had a mine of their own
I really don't know
How you'd get it so right
To have me winding
Then grinding
Uncontrollably...
And I'll never
Be able to forget
When you rolled us over
And I was on top
Hunching
Your lips
And I couldn't stop
My hips
Have a mind of their own
And incredibly
I cum again
Saturating
Your mouth with my sweet juices again...
I remember it
Like it was yesterday
How at first we
Innocently
Flirted laughed and played
Then we touched
Melding together
And we kissed
And you made sure not to miss
One inch of me
And yes you've made me this way
How my legs spread
Most eagerly
To be caressed
By you
And when you pressed
Your lips and tongue
Down there
Where
It's aching
For you
First time I ever cried
Not caring
If anybody heard
And first time
I was ever
Completely
Satisfied
And this I'll never be able to deny
With just your lips
Down there
Trust me
Nothing
Can ever compare
So when you come home to me
After being gone
For far too long
It shouldn't be a wonder
That my legs spread
All too easily
Anxiously
Wanting
Needing
Your head
Baby intensely
I can't help anticipating
It going down
To my pussy
Bringing
This fierce need
For this
Your touch your kiss
Them lips
Yes you've made my hips
Have a mind of their own...
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Written on 7-11-12 by LL
Published 1st Oct 2012
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1st Oct 2012 00:16am
I've thought of ways to capture this feeling and I had not found it until I read this. I want to share this with a friend of mine.......man what a memory. Very eloquently stated, moving and even as a man, I feel your pleasure in these words.
Xcellent LL : )
Xcellent LL : )
2nd Oct 2012 00:10am
Beautifully stated man, 4 real & i appreciate u sharing that :) as always your words make me smile:)
1st Oct 2012 1:58am
Inside the furnace of human desire is the record of every little caress, moan, sigh, expression. You have proved that with this work. Wonderful.
2nd Oct 2012 00:12am
1st Oct 2012 3:56am
Your poetry is amazing! I could even get a mental image and that's talent.
2nd Oct 2012 00:17am
Wow thank u 4 that, I seriously needed that;) wow im happy 2 know u really enjoyed my poem :) :) :) You have truly made my day;) Thank u again:)
4th Oct 2012 2:09am
You go hard....do fat i like everything i have read by you. Keep em coming lady ˇ
21st Oct 2012 8:26pm
11th Jan 2013 4:07pm
A very nicely and highly erotically written poem. I enjoyed reading it and can easily imagine (and appreciate) the picture that you draw for the reader.
