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" Mind and Pussy "
Sometimes
I don't know why
It's you that makes my
Mind and pussy
Feel so devinely
Penetrated
And honestly
It's frustrating
Because I have No
Control
Over it
Not use to it
A dick
With so much power over me
Because ya see
Usually
It's my sweet sugar cookie
That has a man dropping
Straight to his knees
Just to get a tasting
But now it's me
With that wicked need
To have you inside
Deeply
Penetrating
My mouth
And there's no doubt
I'm yearning
For you to groan and moan
Out loud
For it sends
Wonderful sensations straight
To my pussy
Making it pulsate
Vibrantly...
And the way you
Do
Get on your knees
Taking me
Dripping wet
Onto your warm
Welcoming
Tongue
My mind
And pussy
Knows
You won't be done
Until all my cum
Is in
Your mouth...
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wirtten on 6-13-12 by LL
I don't know why
It's you that makes my
Mind and pussy
Feel so devinely
Penetrated
And honestly
It's frustrating
Because I have No
Control
Over it
Not use to it
A dick
With so much power over me
Because ya see
Usually
It's my sweet sugar cookie
That has a man dropping
Straight to his knees
Just to get a tasting
But now it's me
With that wicked need
To have you inside
Deeply
Penetrating
My mouth
And there's no doubt
I'm yearning
For you to groan and moan
Out loud
For it sends
Wonderful sensations straight
To my pussy
Making it pulsate
Vibrantly...
And the way you
Do
Get on your knees
Taking me
Dripping wet
Onto your warm
Welcoming
Tongue
My mind
And pussy
Knows
You won't be done
Until all my cum
Is in
Your mouth...
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wirtten on 6-13-12 by LL
Published 1st Oct 2012
| Edited 10th Jan 2013
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1st Oct 2012 1:54am
This makes me wish a significant other were closer! I even enjoy the structure of the lines.
10th Jan 2013 5:16pm
Thanx i appreciate that, but I had sum rewording 2 do so I decided it needed sum changes...its a new day, a new me...;)..
Some years ago, I was hurt in a motorcycle accident and for a short period of time, the *plumbing* was in a state of disarray so to speak. "Hard" was humble and "cum" had "went". It wasn't long after that my sweet thang left me on the first thing smoking........
........little did I realize at the time that your "sentiment" was the reason why. LOL
I dig the way you write....always have.
........little did I realize at the time that your "sentiment" was the reason why. LOL
I dig the way you write....always have.
10th Jan 2013 5:20pm
Praise Jesus u still wit us man 4real tho! Thats why i do not fuck wit em! but n e ways man thanx 4 reading;)
5th Jan 2013 2:01pm
On the subject of Mind and Pussy
Look up Naomi Wolf sometime, “Vagina: A New Biography”
The latest Neuroscience reveals a pussy-mind connection linked to consciousness and creativity.
Copy and paste this link into your web browser to hear her lecture.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfT7nz19GUs
Look up Naomi Wolf sometime, “Vagina: A New Biography”
The latest Neuroscience reveals a pussy-mind connection linked to consciousness and creativity.
Copy and paste this link into your web browser to hear her lecture.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfT7nz19GUs
10th Jan 2013 4:26pm
Oh that sounds lovely, and i will do that, ima check dat out 4real;) Thanks 4 reading ;)
11th Jan 2013 3:59pm
Claudia --I know that your comment wasn't meant for me but I tried the link. It explains much about the mind being truly the most important erotic zone we as humans have. On a sort of different note --vagina and jewel box seemed like a perfect image --an image I might try to use in a future poem. At any rate, thank you for the link to a MOST informative lecture.
Another excellently erotic write. A turn on to read but that was part of your reason for writing it, wasn't it?
I assume that you enjoy all his cum in your mouth as much as you enjoy yours in his?
I assume that you enjoy all his cum in your mouth as much as you enjoy yours in his?
15th Jan 2013 00:01am
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