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Farewell My First
College tested Us
we didnt really pass
so young,cant be blamed
for sampling various
hands on your ass
I dont hate you
and its for this precise reason
I came home to save us
despite loss of tuition
yet when I got back
you were still so conflicted
you tried to juggle Me
with that damned random dickhead
and though Im stoic
like rain harmless to statue
only a fool
wouldnt recognize
you hung
a noose
on Our hope
hurt beyond
mere damage
we stuck it through
after a couple months
you were mine again
yet we constantly bickered
the root cause
of course was
"him"
we diligently
went through
all conventional motions
but we both could feel
Our special Lovelight
had dimmed
until one night
we went out
to hear Gil Scott Heron
a poet of dimension
you couldnt help
but get sucked in
right after the show
I said "wow, so amazing"
you said
"Im hungry,
wanna go to
Burger King?"
It was at that
precise moment
I knew we were severed
a snuffed out ember
love lost forever
but you enjoyed
your whopper
dug bein with
first Lover
confident
from the abyss
we`d undoubtedly recover
we went to
my folks house
snuck down stairs
quiet as a louse
I pressed you
against
bearing wall post
we made love
as if visited
by the ghost
of our earliest years
it could bring
Liam Neeson to tears
you finally shed
indecision and fear
the sex was
way beyond compare
anything
we had previously shared
and baby
our default is
way, way up there
so this act could again seal us as pair
in the afterglow
I ruminated so
it had been
six shitty months
til this incredible
pay-off
there was no way
I would go through that again
even though heavenly climax
was at the Grey-Bows end
so I beseech you baby
though last act full of passion
lets end it right now
before months of cold ration
yeah I see you are stunned
but this wasnt planned
yet in matters important
I go by my gut
there are great highs ahead of us
but also prolonged lows
this is no way to live
must let each other go
I`ll never forget you
you are the first
you are the best
you're also the worst
so lets get past this,
separately experience
whatever lies ahead
I`ll always Love You Baby
24/7 You can still call me
but get it through your head
we wont share the same destiny
with Love and regrets,
forever your first...........
we didnt really pass
so young,cant be blamed
for sampling various
hands on your ass
I dont hate you
and its for this precise reason
I came home to save us
despite loss of tuition
yet when I got back
you were still so conflicted
you tried to juggle Me
with that damned random dickhead
and though Im stoic
like rain harmless to statue
only a fool
wouldnt recognize
you hung
a noose
on Our hope
hurt beyond
mere damage
we stuck it through
after a couple months
you were mine again
yet we constantly bickered
the root cause
of course was
"him"
we diligently
went through
all conventional motions
but we both could feel
Our special Lovelight
had dimmed
until one night
we went out
to hear Gil Scott Heron
a poet of dimension
you couldnt help
but get sucked in
right after the show
I said "wow, so amazing"
you said
"Im hungry,
wanna go to
Burger King?"
It was at that
precise moment
I knew we were severed
a snuffed out ember
love lost forever
but you enjoyed
your whopper
dug bein with
first Lover
confident
from the abyss
we`d undoubtedly recover
we went to
my folks house
snuck down stairs
quiet as a louse
I pressed you
against
bearing wall post
we made love
as if visited
by the ghost
of our earliest years
it could bring
Liam Neeson to tears
you finally shed
indecision and fear
the sex was
way beyond compare
anything
we had previously shared
and baby
our default is
way, way up there
so this act could again seal us as pair
in the afterglow
I ruminated so
it had been
six shitty months
til this incredible
pay-off
there was no way
I would go through that again
even though heavenly climax
was at the Grey-Bows end
so I beseech you baby
though last act full of passion
lets end it right now
before months of cold ration
yeah I see you are stunned
but this wasnt planned
yet in matters important
I go by my gut
there are great highs ahead of us
but also prolonged lows
this is no way to live
must let each other go
I`ll never forget you
you are the first
you are the best
you're also the worst
so lets get past this,
separately experience
whatever lies ahead
I`ll always Love You Baby
24/7 You can still call me
but get it through your head
we wont share the same destiny
with Love and regrets,
forever your first...........
Published 28th Sep 2012
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28th Sep 2012 6:49pm
28th Sep 2012 8:25pm
thanks nikki -
this Tale is 99.999999% True --
the impurity?
she wanted McDonalds, not BurgerKing !
LMAO!
this Tale is 99.999999% True --
the impurity?
she wanted McDonalds, not BurgerKing !
LMAO!
28th Sep 2012 6:49pm
Posted and this revolution will not be televised; it will be live, Brother. Hard call to make. Hard act to follow.
28th Sep 2012 8:26pm
thanks man -- luckily I found a higher connection after that,
but Our first experience together cant be matched --
we were very lucky in that regard --
BTW -- te Spanker looks almost like an asian alan Ludden!
but Our first experience together cant be matched --
we were very lucky in that regard --
BTW -- te Spanker looks almost like an asian alan Ludden!
Anonymous
28th Sep 2012 6:57pm
Nicely done drivel
strider
strider
Thank you Strider ---
Ive never been a promiscuous dude --
so every one of these implosions hurts like a Beyotch...
I feel reverberations of most of em to this day...
Ive never been a promiscuous dude --
so every one of these implosions hurts like a Beyotch...
I feel reverberations of most of em to this day...
29th Sep 2012 1:17am
I loved reading this story for it's honesty
and agony - you kept the reader interested,
Very well done.
Best wishes
Ricecake
and agony - you kept the reader interested,
Very well done.
Best wishes
Ricecake
