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Found and Lost Part 1: Abandoned Seeing �

�
Can you still feel me?
do you just feel an absence?
has re-in-touching day to day
caused any change
in your emotion`s range?
�
it`s got me tense
worrying bout things
from this point and hence
has the passion already begun to recede
amidst a culture seemingly open
yet carefully calibrated to impede
�
to block off �
from heart and soul
stand in the way
of Romantic goals
to shackle
to expectations homogenious
has that alien atmosphere �
already messed with US?
�
I can draw �
pon countless visions
rememberances of communion �
with my Masterpiece
yet the one that now makes �
deepest incision
is you fading in rearview �
on an obscure backstreet
�
even amidst extra kisses �
and hearfelt assurances
the last sad image of your beauty �
bore that unfocused glance
those EYES that see �
directly into my being �
wasted for moments
by abandoning seeing
�
use of those organs �
disconnected by truth
the abject bliss of this chapter �
finally unable to soothe
whatever the pain �
that shakes out from hideous shadow
that already darkens �
the path for YOU to me, and me to YOU
�

Written by drivelicious13

(alon aLion)

Published 27th Sep 2012

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Re: Found and Lost Part 1: Abandoned Seeing �

runningturtle87

27th Sep 2012 1:47pm

Receding intimacy is a painful operation, not unlike surgery: Psychic surgery. Recovery is a beast and trust is an issue. YOU are broadcasting on 100,000 watts, D.

the abject bliss of this chapter
finally unable to soothe
whatever the pain
that shakes out from hideous shadow
that already darkens
the path for YOU to me, and me to YOU...crushing.