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Virginity`s Tomb
Virginity`s Tomb
What a surprise
milk flowing thighs
gives the beast rise
of such massive size
he looks down and prys
with cold polar eyes
whiter her tutu
beast a dark Hutu
or is the dude Tutsi?
either way
this divisive ballet
commenced back in the day
bulls belong penned
in fields of cotton
anywhere chained
she`s plied we assume
with bottles of booze
and roses in bloom
Virginity's Tomb
prone and tender
dancer surrenders
as manhood threatens
such a skilled artist
working in earnest
fed coal to old furnace
within rendered beauty
one clearly sees
racist misandry
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Entered in COMPETITION:
"The bull & the ballet dancer"
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/3348/30/
What a surprise
milk flowing thighs
gives the beast rise
of such massive size
he looks down and prys
with cold polar eyes
whiter her tutu
beast a dark Hutu
or is the dude Tutsi?
either way
this divisive ballet
commenced back in the day
bulls belong penned
in fields of cotton
anywhere chained
she`s plied we assume
with bottles of booze
and roses in bloom
Virginity's Tomb
prone and tender
dancer surrenders
as manhood threatens
such a skilled artist
working in earnest
fed coal to old furnace
within rendered beauty
one clearly sees
racist misandry
======================================
Entered in COMPETITION:
"The bull & the ballet dancer"
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/3348/30/
Published 26th Sep 2012
| Edited 27th Sep 2012
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26th Sep 2012 7:19am
Thank you so much for reading -
I tried NOT to take the Romantic road -
I appreciate the time you took to read and comment...
I tried NOT to take the Romantic road -
I appreciate the time you took to read and comment...
26th Sep 2012 7:46am
Ditto when I saw it earlier in the comp
And read now I thought what a masterpiece
Liked liked liked!!!
And read now I thought what a masterpiece
Liked liked liked!!!
26th Sep 2012 5:17pm
Hey --
thanks so much --
with all due respect to the
judge, she was thrown by my rhyme scheme --
Well -- its not in me to scheme --
and I dont love bein judged --
I dont compete --
I practice -
much appreciation
thanks so much --
with all due respect to the
judge, she was thrown by my rhyme scheme --
Well -- its not in me to scheme --
and I dont love bein judged --
I dont compete --
I practice -
much appreciation
Anonymous
26th Sep 2012 8:50am
Good one drivel
Strider
Strider
26th Sep 2012 5:17pm
26th Sep 2012 4:19pm
One for the lost virgins.
Fucking awesome.
Soundsscary.
Im glad i prefer women
Clio
Fucking awesome.
Soundsscary.
Im glad i prefer women
Clio
We have a lot in common Clio --
I prefer women too : > )
thank you for taking the time
26th Sep 2012 7:18pm
26th Sep 2012 8:58pm
Anonymous
27th Sep 2012 2:29pm
Just beautifully penned
A winner!
A winner!
27th Sep 2012 2:55pm
