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Last Days
They say the moment before you die
your life flashes before your eyes
now, isn't it true
that the perfect view
is the sky as you hit the ground
and everyone hears the sound
i imagine myself in that way
body destroyed, as i lay
still hearing the birds
and the crowd chirp
and the sun up high
calming and inviting
no longer am i breathing
i realize that i'm crying
i still have feelings
the moments before you die
your life flashes before your eyes
your life flashes before your eyes
now, isn't it true
that the perfect view
is the sky as you hit the ground
and everyone hears the sound
i imagine myself in that way
body destroyed, as i lay
still hearing the birds
and the crowd chirp
and the sun up high
calming and inviting
no longer am i breathing
i realize that i'm crying
i still have feelings
the moments before you die
your life flashes before your eyes
Published 22nd Sep 2012
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22nd Sep 2012 9:26am
I really like this Jimm, I believe there is awareness, the conscience even after the heart stops beating and once the brain dies. There is one recorded incident that I know of that proves this.
The body tingles when it's dying, it's the blood cells separating.
Great pen.
The body tingles when it's dying, it's the blood cells separating.
Great pen.
