Any Way

Look at you and your honest feedback!
for me,just enough to not quite "get it" but enough to stay,and stay interested. Love the feel. Goddess w stolen quilts- juxtaposing those realms is great. Painted lady line,feels awesome on the tongue.
Dare he enrage the lady paddy by questioning a stroke?-he dares..not sure what the triple murder adds...as is i read it fast,almost lacksidasical...is that the intent?

Edit: nevermind..i am taking the liberty of reading it that way, and works for me in a merrily merrily merrily life is but a dream sorta way

Translation:
Wish I could kill the endless monotony of marriage sometimes...
especially at night when I have dreams of the life I sometimes miss.
Ambien gets me through and makes the Tamara Lempicka painting over our bed dance as I slip into restless sleep and dream of forbidden things, enjoyable until my husband wakes me to a stale reality.
Am I really who I think that am now, or still a bit of who I was before?

(See what I mean?)  ;)  Also, I intentionally write the most painful with the least words, for in person I am much the same.)  Thank you.

Well no duh!...ha...the piece certainly holds up, but that kind of clarity is cool to hear.thank...im a cheesy artist that likes great painting references too..oh wait

Also, I am an artist so I like to make cheesy paint references- hence the watercolour blah blah blah.

"I am a goddess

but the husband steals my quilt

the watercolor fades

who are you, anyway?"

I really like this ... I get accused of being a "cover thief". Can relate to the monotony challenge. Trying to work on that myself!

That means a lot!  Thanks so much :)

I like seeing talent in this form..creating an unequivocal depth beneath the words without the wordiness to spoil the sentiment..well done!
Peace

Wow, thanks!