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Worship Me
On your knees, pray to me.
Make me scream, consume my dreams.
Seduce my soul, enslave me whole.
My body quakes, my bonds you break.
Inhabit my heart, tattoo your mark.
Quench your thirst, make it hurt.
Demand your lust, begin to thrust.
Eyes are blind, feel to find.
You've found the floor, worship me more.
Make me scream, consume my dreams.
Seduce my soul, enslave me whole.
My body quakes, my bonds you break.
Inhabit my heart, tattoo your mark.
Quench your thirst, make it hurt.
Demand your lust, begin to thrust.
Eyes are blind, feel to find.
You've found the floor, worship me more.
Published 20th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2012 8:45pm
20th Sep 2012 8:35pm
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20th Sep 2012 10:34pm
Anonymous
21st Sep 2012 2:08am
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21st Sep 2012 4:07am
21st Sep 2012 4:30am
Oh wow! Short sweet yet deep woth so much pleasure. Whew I'm trying to concentrate wanting to reread the lines more. I can see the dominance and demanding which makes the vision sexy. Can't wait to read more.
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O.N.E!™
21st Sep 2012 6:07am
Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 6:21pm
Awesome write, love your word choice and phrasing, painting some very vivid images....your choice of punctuation was nice too, controlling the reader this way to ensure they absorb every syllable.
#epicnaughtywrite
Ben
#epicnaughtywrite
Ben
17th Jan 2019 10:38am
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
16th Feb 2020 3:51am
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