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I Must Be Emo
I cut myself.
I paint my nails black.
I wear dark clothing.
I must be emo.
I am never happy.
I don't see the reason for living.
I am cheap version of goth.
I must be emo.
If I said I like guys,
Ha.
I am only half right.
Nothing is better than emo love.
I must be emo.
look like I am dead.
I hate my life.
People frown at me.
My parents think I am a freak.
I must be emo.
I paint my nails black.
I wear dark clothing.
I must be emo.
I am never happy.
I don't see the reason for living.
I am cheap version of goth.
I must be emo.
If I said I like guys,
Ha.
I am only half right.
Nothing is better than emo love.
I must be emo.
look like I am dead.
I hate my life.
People frown at me.
My parents think I am a freak.
I must be emo.
Published 30th Apr 2010
| Edited 21st Apr 2011
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5th May 2010 12:03pm
This has an interesting social comment, although the imagery is limited, as are linguistic techniques. Still, repetition is used effectively.
6th May 2010 00:48am
thanks...i made this cos the song I Must Be Emo by Jeffree Starr was running through my head..and i made my own version..not as good as his though...
6th Apr 2011 4:49pm
Not to be entirely rude, but it seems like you're ripping off the Adam & Andrew song "Emo Kid"
Example lines:
"I'm just a bad,
cheap imitation of goth"
"If I said I liked girls, I'd only be half right!"
"I look like I'm dead dead and dress like a homo"
Example lines:
"I'm just a bad,
cheap imitation of goth"
"If I said I liked girls, I'd only be half right!"
"I look like I'm dead dead and dress like a homo"
I'm sorry but you really can't copy lines from a song and call it your own you have copied Adam&Andrew "Emo Kid" and I think you should dedicate this appropriately as you've cut lines out of it and put your name to it. It's not your own if you merely shorten lines of someone elses work. Sorry.
16th Apr 2011 7:44pm
i didnt copy. i made my own version. i may have used a couple lines. but the rest is all my work.
16th Apr 2011 11:10pm
You "may" have. You did, R and it's not your work if it's formed on their idea and their lines.
so its wrong that i made my own version. that fits me? and if you read my comment up above on the first comment. i do give my thanks to Jeffree. thank you. his is way better than mine. but i had his song running through my head.
