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TerminusMeditation(Or:dead fckn ugly)
byDan(foto+poom)KozakonSu
ndaSep16,2012a10:27am
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death death death
s'fckn ugly is death....
young carc'ass old carc'ass
(butt'specially thee Old one's)
is like
is like is
like
Ugly As Shit........
leavi n g (yOur) carc'ass behind
is
is like
is just like
takin(rather 'makin')
(A) Shit on thee
sweetprecious
LivingRoom
carpet..........(&
tha's not-even-mentioning
th'ugly f'act of having to let'go
of dearest,dire Ego Self)
Dead ! h'ow
plain[ly] mthrfckn
inconsiderate..............
it seems (an) advance apology is
in order
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Published 16th Sep 2012
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16th Sep 2012 7:02pm
Great how that full stop is as the start, followed by that tirade of 'death's. It's like the bit on an answer phone "please leave your message after the tone.." followed by a beep and a flash of words from an irritated relative on the other end of the line, ranting at no one.
I like this one a lot. Funny how people become almost ashamed of a body once it's run its course. Shouldn't really be the case, as all those bodies have been the most faithful boats. And I like how the title illustrates that need to make a body presentable by hiding away the 'dead fckn ugly' in those brackets. Love the tongue-in-cheek delivery of those last few lines.
I like this one a lot. Funny how people become almost ashamed of a body once it's run its course. Shouldn't really be the case, as all those bodies have been the most faithful boats. And I like how the title illustrates that need to make a body presentable by hiding away the 'dead fckn ugly' in those brackets. Love the tongue-in-cheek delivery of those last few lines.
17th Sep 2012 1:00am
Love the way ye read this.....i real'ly appreciate..
thank ye, dear
thank ye, dear
17th Sep 2012 1:18am
Have to agree with Merda on this DK. This one is something special despite its brevity. The wordplay does not digress into too many side jokes. It is rather thoughtful and poignant.
17th Sep 2012 5:16am
&'preciations on'ye aswell, braggo....eye'm too tired t'say
more....butthank ye
more....butthank ye
