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HOLD ME CLOSE
Hear me whisper your name
with breathy sighs and half closed eyes
I'll whisper your name
through pouting lips
and swaying hips
I'll whisper your name
with juices flowing
and sweat pouring
I'll whisper your name
with fingers clutching
and pulses rushing
I'll whisper your name
with toes curling
and my world swirling
I'm screaming your name
with breathy sighs and half closed eyes
I'll whisper your name
through pouting lips
and swaying hips
I'll whisper your name
with juices flowing
and sweat pouring
I'll whisper your name
with fingers clutching
and pulses rushing
I'll whisper your name
with toes curling
and my world swirling
I'm screaming your name
Published 15th Sep 2012
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15th Sep 2012 10:44pm
Nice. I like how it isn't a grotesque poem, but subtle and soft with the words. Keep it up. :)
16th Sep 2012 9:50pm
25th Sep 2012 5:57pm
At first I was reluctant to write as the title reminded me of a song I hated. Fortunately this is much easier to take!
16th Feb 2014 3:06am
That was HOT sweets!!!
Well written!!
Pleasure too read!!
Sir Lancelott
visit sometime
Well written!!
Pleasure too read!!
Sir Lancelott
visit sometime
8th Mar 2014 3:46am
The simple sexiness in this poem is cradled perfectly by it's structure; you say so much, with so few words!
