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I just hear your voice
and it makes me rock hard.
I can't help myself.
Thinking of you there
on the other end
makes me want to be there.
And the electricity surges
through me
uncontrollably.
I didn't call you for this;
it just happens when we talk.
When we write.
When I see your picture
flash up on the screen
It's like I can't explain it
except that
I really don't know
what to do.
My body takes over.
My mind goes rigid
and can only think
of just one thing.
And not going there
is more than I can bare.
runningturtle87
and it makes me rock hard.
I can't help myself.
Thinking of you there
on the other end
makes me want to be there.
And the electricity surges
through me
uncontrollably.
I didn't call you for this;
it just happens when we talk.
When we write.
When I see your picture
flash up on the screen
It's like I can't explain it
except that
I really don't know
what to do.
My body takes over.
My mind goes rigid
and can only think
of just one thing.
And not going there
is more than I can bare.
runningturtle87
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Re: Trace contacts
13th Sep 2012 1:48pm
Unusual piece...very erotic though no actual contact occurs. Maybe very topical in this virtual age!
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re: Re: Trace contacts
13th Sep 2012 3:07pm
Bahzacktly.....cyber-sparkles seem to be the newest chess move of the erotic edge...the need to see the notification is its own hot button. Thanks for reading, Hoodedpoet.
Re: Trace contacts
You reminded me of myself when my childhood sweetheart of 43 years ago found each other on Facebook last year, and after that we spent a nightly tryst by phone or via Skype. Most of my poems in the days to come were inspired by her.
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re: Re: Trace contacts
13th Sep 2012 3:39pm
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13th Sep 2012 10:22pm
Erotic without the need for vulgarity or the commonly used terms or phrases. I enjoyed this poem.
Wow facebook was up 43 years ago?
Wow facebook was up 43 years ago?
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14th Sep 2012 1:18am
I loved your reading of that line.....very rich...
Vulgarity has its place...not every place...thanks for reading, OctoberArts.
Vulgarity has its place...not every place...thanks for reading, OctoberArts.
re: re: re: Re: Trace contacts
14th Sep 2012 3:38pm
Sorry OctoberArts, I forgot to type "last year" even though that's what I was thinking.
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14th Sep 2012 10:38pm
I loved it as it was....a harmless ambiguity of anachronism. A dangling 4th dimensional dispensation....
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re: Re: Trace contacts
17th Sep 2012 8:48pm
To make a connection is beyond sex, and so more than I can bare is beyond nakedness. Real intimacy is a region untouched and untouchable, and the flame of it is only faintly inhabited by the spark of a passion that drives the uncontrollable. And then to be in proximity, to unleash the beast as you have said, that is a matter of attending to what is beneath it all anyways....below what is below, wordless and indefinable. Ink on the tongue of a mad man. Peace, Lily_Mae.
Re: Trace contacts
20th Sep 2012 8:44pm
This I like. I understand the feeling in this as, I am certain, does anyone with a long distance lover.
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20th Sep 2012 10:59pm