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More than what meets the eye Surpasses your internal physiology
Greater than your mental capacity
You've lost the right to choose
It's in control
Broad and definite
Consumes your every fabric
The almighty one
Tells you lies you won't realize
Sticks up with you through think and thin
Til warmth turns to negativity
Greater than your mental capacity
You've lost the right to choose
It's in control
Broad and definite
Consumes your every fabric
The almighty one
Tells you lies you won't realize
Sticks up with you through think and thin
Til warmth turns to negativity
Published 7th Sep 2012
| Edited 12th Sep 2012
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9th Sep 2012 00:49am
At first I was like, "This isn't that dark.." But then it hit me strongly in that last line. Great poem, even for a short one, it had a hint of suspense. You are a talented fledgling writer. Welcome to DUP.
AlwaysCaliban
AlwaysCaliban
