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Emptiness embodied
I have to be strong, no one else fights for me
I have push on no matter what my problems might be
to busy surviving to be a lady
trees aren't the only things shady
no one to trust on this blue orb
pain is all I can absorb
sunny days don't mean a thing
nothing makes me wanna sing
trapped in a state of disrepair
I think its obvious I don't really care
moving along because that's what I do
suffering to live, pushing on through
wishing for things to get better,
if wishes were horses we would all ride together
needing someone, anyone a friend
nothing, zip, only dead ends
screaming help into deaf ears
no comes, been the same for years
I must do everything on my own
it is destined for me to be alone
I have push on no matter what my problems might be
to busy surviving to be a lady
trees aren't the only things shady
no one to trust on this blue orb
pain is all I can absorb
sunny days don't mean a thing
nothing makes me wanna sing
trapped in a state of disrepair
I think its obvious I don't really care
moving along because that's what I do
suffering to live, pushing on through
wishing for things to get better,
if wishes were horses we would all ride together
needing someone, anyone a friend
nothing, zip, only dead ends
screaming help into deaf ears
no comes, been the same for years
I must do everything on my own
it is destined for me to be alone
Published 4th Sep 2012
| Edited 5th Sep 2012
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4th Sep 2012 9:53pm
"trapped in a state of disrepair
I think its obvious I don't really care
moving along because that's what I do
suffering to live, pushing on through
wishing for things to get better,
if wishes were horses we would all ride together"
The lines above really struck me. I have felt as you have... pain being all I believe to absorb. I know that one such as yourself knows this, but you aren't alone. And will never be truly alone.
Thanks for posting! :)
I think its obvious I don't really care
moving along because that's what I do
suffering to live, pushing on through
wishing for things to get better,
if wishes were horses we would all ride together"
The lines above really struck me. I have felt as you have... pain being all I believe to absorb. I know that one such as yourself knows this, but you aren't alone. And will never be truly alone.
Thanks for posting! :)
4th Sep 2012 10:01pm
4th Sep 2012 10:42pm
==if wishes were horses we would all ride together ====
We're in a place where we are writing,
so we are already riding Nikkeee.......
Some days have F-in long trails........
We're in a place where we are writing,
so we are already riding Nikkeee.......
Some days have F-in long trails........
5th Sep 2012 00:07am
"I must do everything on my own
for it is destined for me to be alone"
Nikki... I can relate to your fatalistic loneliness... but never stop for experience has taught me its harder to start living again... sometimes alone is better than the option... very poignant... god bless
for it is destined for me to be alone"
Nikki... I can relate to your fatalistic loneliness... but never stop for experience has taught me its harder to start living again... sometimes alone is better than the option... very poignant... god bless
5th Sep 2012 00:09am
6th Sep 2012 1:21pm
Suffering to live, I know you not but I love my friend, you won my heart with a word, broke my heart with the same word, I wish I could undo what the world has done, alas that I can not achieve.
I always go back for more, secretly fearing what you'll say, your words are sweet to the taste, but salty in my wounds.
Sabbath
I always go back for more, secretly fearing what you'll say, your words are sweet to the taste, but salty in my wounds.
Sabbath
6th Sep 2012 2:24pm
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