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you'll do what you've always done
you'll do what you've always done
stay too long
pretending you're a suitor
or a knight in shining armor
and i'm a damsel in this dress
what a mess we've made of things
you've been content to play the part
of an ill-suited lover
in a prime-time t.v. sitcom
and i've been swiftly blown about
wearing my heart on my sleeve
stay too long
pretending you're a suitor
or a knight in shining armor
and i'm a damsel in this dress
what a mess we've made of things
you've been content to play the part
of an ill-suited lover
in a prime-time t.v. sitcom
and i've been swiftly blown about
wearing my heart on my sleeve
Published 31st Aug 2012
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31st Aug 2012 5:08pm
You are sharing a wonderful diversity of poems. I like your honesty and exposing your inner soul. Lovely!!
31st Aug 2012 5:20pm
: Thank you, my friend. You have no idea how much that means to me. I'm so honored you feel that way.
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- Edited 31st Aug 2012 8:29pm
31st Aug 2012 8:23pm
Oh Faith,
You know I do love poems of love, but I have a particular liking for those that are short and stack a punch, I think this piece has those things.
I love how you bare it all and share your self and depth in a straight and unwrapped way.
Nice
Al -x-
You know I do love poems of love, but I have a particular liking for those that are short and stack a punch, I think this piece has those things.
I love how you bare it all and share your self and depth in a straight and unwrapped way.
Nice
Al -x-
31st Aug 2012 9:02pm
Dear Al-Your kind words have touched me deeply. I'm honored and thrilled you have enjoyed my poems. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Faith
