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My Sadness Shows
I sit there dieing with no love. I hold thy mistress' lifeless corpse screaming LOVE ME!!!!! There is no hope now but I shall never give up on her for I love thee. Fore we shall find a way when all hope is gone. So with my undieing love I swear to never stop fighting because there will be a day when I hold her in my arms and we will love each other......
Published 27th Aug 2012
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27th Aug 2012 10:38am
27th Aug 2012 1:03pm
Hmmm...change the title...and the poem is good but i think it mught be better if you added more to it..
13th Dec 2013 3:23am
Its perfect.. Made my heart skip a beat and no... I will never give up either... For that time is now xx
