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No Answer
no answer
no answer
almost thirty years ago
no answer
no answer
ironically all this time later
it's still a no show
no answer
no answer
I can't get a reply
no answer
no answer
I know you told me you're shy
no answer
no answer
why do I still try
no answer
no answer
all I can ask you is why
but I bet even to this
I won't get a reply
no answer
almost thirty years ago
no answer
no answer
ironically all this time later
it's still a no show
no answer
no answer
I can't get a reply
no answer
no answer
I know you told me you're shy
no answer
no answer
why do I still try
no answer
no answer
all I can ask you is why
but I bet even to this
I won't get a reply
Published 27th Aug 2012
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2012 6:23pm
I like this one-sweetly sad..I am not sure but I think I like it better with one "no answer"
per stanza. Peace,
Miki
per stanza. Peace,
Miki
1st Sep 2012 5:21am
It's funny that you would mention that. I actually thought about putting just one "no answer" into the poem per stanza but then decided to use two for emphasis. Still no answer from him -- but there is always hope, right? Thanks for your comment. :)
2nd Sep 2012 4:01am
Well I hope he's not the reason for your departure. Makes me think of the Beatles, No Reply... Your inbox is ringing... jj
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2012 10:39pm
Your pain was well expressed and I felt it. Thank you for sharing your work.
Anonymous
21st Oct 2012 7:16am
i like it, perfect the way you ended it
21st Oct 2012 8:04am
