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Ransacking the night
Deep into the darkest night
looking for myself
looking through the darkness
for my soul
someone told me I'd find it there
not wanting the sun to shine
needing the darkness for my personal journey
needing every hour, every second there
ransacking the night
I must find myself In the black midnight
where am I
the truest part of myself is lost
lost in a starless abyss
looking for myself
looking through the darkness
for my soul
someone told me I'd find it there
not wanting the sun to shine
needing the darkness for my personal journey
needing every hour, every second there
ransacking the night
I must find myself In the black midnight
where am I
the truest part of myself is lost
lost in a starless abyss
Published 24th Aug 2012
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24th Aug 2012 3:46pm
My experience is some people don't even want to look, regardless of whether their souls are in the dark or the light.
The search can be the most rewarding journey of all...
The search can be the most rewarding journey of all...
24th Aug 2012 3:50pm
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- Edited 24th Aug 2012 3:52pm
24th Aug 2012 3:51pm
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24th Aug 2012 3:53pm
24th Aug 2012 6:00pm
You are right. We descend (into oneself), sometimes quite a while, before we can ascend, and then it is only episodic, fragmentary. You are a good poet (perhaps use "darkness, etc.) to explicitly, but you say what needs to be said. Thanks.
marcella1
marcella1
24th Aug 2012 6:03pm
25th Aug 2012 1:24pm
Damn!!! Nikkimoe!!! This is some deep shit yo! Im scared of the night thank god for my sponge Bob night light :)
25th Aug 2012 2:55pm
