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What We See
And what I notice
about you
is about my filtering system
and so
it is
about me...
if we are perfectly
at peace,
there is nothing
but peace
around us...
if we are
at war
with ourselves,
we are constantly
on the outlook
for the enemy
within.
runningturtle87
about you
is about my filtering system
and so
it is
about me...
if we are perfectly
at peace,
there is nothing
but peace
around us...
if we are
at war
with ourselves,
we are constantly
on the outlook
for the enemy
within.
runningturtle87
Published 22nd Aug 2012
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22nd Aug 2012 6:11pm
Croc-brain at work! Evolution may change the mind of man but man's mind will always work the same. Love the way you've written this.
22nd Aug 2012 6:19pm
Thank you, Scattered_Thoughts...I really agree..this is an evolutionary thing, and we may want to evade it, but we spill the beans on ourselves all the time!
23rd Aug 2012 00:05am
running turtle,
wat i admire most in ur writes..is your short styled yet enlightening verses.
war with ourselves..peace in &around us..very true.juz the need fr any moment.
thnxx fr the read
~uma.x
23rd Aug 2012 1:00am
Uma, thanks for the comment; glad that you find the work for versatile.
23rd Aug 2012 00:40am
if we are
at war
with ourselves,
we are constantly
on the outlook
for the enemy
within.
How true ... I like it.
at war
with ourselves,
we are constantly
on the outlook
for the enemy
within.
How true ... I like it.
23rd Aug 2012 1:03am
LeColonel, thanks for the comment. I keep trying to nail down why wherever I go I find trouble. I think I am the common denominator!
23rd Aug 2012 00:52am
Internal conflicts are more likely to be hurtful then external ones. Good read, runningturtle.
23rd Aug 2012 1:08am
Grace, how very true...I've been looking into this idea of quantum psychology, which just may place us in a position of being all internal...no external pain, since all may be consciousness....crazy stuff....
