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Stab Me With Your Words
If you want me dead.. Kill me with a knife
If you want me dead.. Don't kill me with emotions
Don't make me do it myself.. Save me the time
I'm tired of this.. I want to die
Do it quick.. And don't hold back
I can't take this anymore
I'll give anything to be with you.. But make up your mind
I mean I'm all for being used.. But could you just give me a little break
I need to rest..
Give me one year.
That's what I need.
I need time to breath.
That's all i need.
If you want me dead.. Don't kill me with emotions
Don't make me do it myself.. Save me the time
I'm tired of this.. I want to die
Do it quick.. And don't hold back
I can't take this anymore
I'll give anything to be with you.. But make up your mind
I mean I'm all for being used.. But could you just give me a little break
I need to rest..
Give me one year.
That's what I need.
I need time to breath.
That's all i need.
Published 16th Apr 2010
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16th Apr 2010 7:41pm
wow "Im all for being used" that was a powerful line.. the poems kinda disjointed though Im not sure if you want to live die or fuck.. maybe all of the above in a display or stream of consciousness writing which is great if thats the case.. I remember when I tried to kill myself I called this girl.. blood and cuts and stab wounds and pills and liquor in my stystem and I called a girl that i nick named alice after lewis carrolls books.. because I rememebered the phrase just ask alice.. so I got her voice mail and I said "kill me" I was half expecting half wishing in a pipe dream that shed come to my door with a gun and finish the job.. sorry to rant but thats what this poem made me think of.. cheers hun!
19th Aug 2012 12:15pm
I found this poem by chance using the randon poem button on DU and glad i did as it's very moving, great wording very good :)
