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Disrespectful
I hate the way you talk to me
When you use those words
Say it in that tone
Look at me with that look in you eyes
I've told you that it hurts me
That I hate those words to my very core
You don't care
You use it as ammo, to your benefit
Its annoying, rude, mean, painful, frustrating
When you talk to me like that
I want to slice your throat open
And dig for your vocal cords
So I can rip them out, with my bare hands
So that you can never talk to me like that
Or anyone else
Ever again..
When you use those words
Say it in that tone
Look at me with that look in you eyes
I've told you that it hurts me
That I hate those words to my very core
You don't care
You use it as ammo, to your benefit
Its annoying, rude, mean, painful, frustrating
When you talk to me like that
I want to slice your throat open
And dig for your vocal cords
So I can rip them out, with my bare hands
So that you can never talk to me like that
Or anyone else
Ever again..
Published 20th Aug 2012
| Edited 29th Sep 2012
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28th Aug 2012 00:21am
Nice write.
It takes strength to openly speak such words. Haters and abusers (yes, verbal assault is abuse) are usually cowards who try to humiliate and smack others to feel superior. They are often victims of the same and emulate it. But there is NO excuse for such destructive choices.
It takes strength to openly speak such words. Haters and abusers (yes, verbal assault is abuse) are usually cowards who try to humiliate and smack others to feel superior. They are often victims of the same and emulate it. But there is NO excuse for such destructive choices.
28th Aug 2012 00:38am
Thank you I am glad you commented because the great thing about poetry is it doesn't have to be specific for people to relate, this is actually my sister always using certain words towards me that i hate
29th Aug 2012 2:50am
I like this poem...it sort of took me by surprise...like a little ball of snow rolling down a hill getting bigger and bigger until smashes into you...great...thanks for the read
Doe Eyes...
Philip
Doe Eyes...
Philip
29th Aug 2012 10:59am
Thank you:) you should read some of my other poems, i do the surprise thing a lot. You might like The Darkest Pain
29th Aug 2012 3:41pm
Good job, way to speak out, takes courage. You have precise and clear way of writing. Inspiring, I can't wait to read your next writing.
29th Aug 2012 8:38pm
