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Scars
Scars are caused by a deep cut or burn
Scars are a sign that something hurt
scars hold a dark memory
blood triceling down
The sound of a sizzle from a fresh burn
Soon enough the scars add up
A collection, if you will gathers
Of pain and suffering
sometimes you forget the hard part
The occurrence of the event
And you put yourself out there again
with hopes
Things will be different
Risk it
And you get hurt again, and again
forgetting your past
So many times you get cut and hurt
The people dear to you go away
you feel so broken...
not sure why
Well...
Sometimes the scar is the only proof that the pain was real
When people leave and go away
at least you can look at the scars
And know what you've been through
Scars are a sign that something hurt
scars hold a dark memory
blood triceling down
The sound of a sizzle from a fresh burn
Soon enough the scars add up
A collection, if you will gathers
Of pain and suffering
sometimes you forget the hard part
The occurrence of the event
And you put yourself out there again
with hopes
Things will be different
Risk it
And you get hurt again, and again
forgetting your past
So many times you get cut and hurt
The people dear to you go away
you feel so broken...
not sure why
Well...
Sometimes the scar is the only proof that the pain was real
When people leave and go away
at least you can look at the scars
And know what you've been through
Written by
Icuduseahugritenow
(WallFlower)
Published 18th Aug 2012
| Edited 28th Oct 2012
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Re: Scars
18th Aug 2012 2:12am
Dont take this offensively, but i'm impressed..i didnt know you had it in you.
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Liked this.
18th Aug 2012 2:55am
I agree. The key for me not repeating my own mistakes is to never forget the pain. Keep it fresh in my mind, so I never fall again.
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18th Aug 2012 1:50pm
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20th Aug 2012 1:16pm
"A really good man loves a really good scar".....Carly Simon
Getting up now is getting off later....you definitely got up....nice work.
Getting up now is getting off later....you definitely got up....nice work.
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4th Sep 2012 1:21am
We all have em externally or internally. Great read for me. I carry a few myself.
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4th Sep 2012 1:47am
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25th Oct 2012 00:10am
This is a really good poem. I have 30 scars on my right arm from a broken world. Do you have any other poems?
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28th Oct 2012 8:47pm
I do have other poems, however not like this but i do recommend my poem The Darkest Pain, its done very well
And thank you so much for your touching comment
And thank you so much for your touching comment
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28th Oct 2012 8:57pm
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28th Oct 2012 8:59pm
:) thank you for reading, always a pleasure knowing people still read my stuff and comment.
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Anonymous
4th Apr 2013 11:09am
The pain is felt through this write....thanks for sharing
:)
:)
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4th Apr 2013 8:51pm