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Passing thoughts
The sky opened on me today with a bang
flash flooding, and over flowing manholes
It made me think of Mother Nature
It made me think of female ejaculation
Both, sloppy cunts
Published 13th Apr 2010
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14th Apr 2010 00:25am
my drive by thought: Upper Case first
letter of both words in your title or neither.
excellent and taut with just enough of the wry. Cunt as applied to nature is luscious wet earth.
I would suggest the following tweaks, and if you disdain them, so be it:
The sky opened on me today with a bang;
flash flooding, and over-flowing manholes
made me think of Mother Nature,
made me think of female ejaculation —
Both sloppy cunts.
letter of both words in your title or neither.
excellent and taut with just enough of the wry. Cunt as applied to nature is luscious wet earth.
I would suggest the following tweaks, and if you disdain them, so be it:
The sky opened on me today with a bang;
flash flooding, and over-flowing manholes
made me think of Mother Nature,
made me think of female ejaculation —
Both sloppy cunts.
