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Death doesnt stop
Death stops for nothing
Everything stops for death
Death won't slow
Only hurry along,
It's twisted path
Taking what it desires
Leaving everything
Broken and hollow
Screaming and crying.
Alone and cold
Missing our loved ones
Grieving and mourning
Leaving us in a barren
Wasteland of devastation.
In a bubble of despair
And burning hatred for death.
Death will never stop
And everything stops for death.
Everything stops for death
Death won't slow
Only hurry along,
It's twisted path
Taking what it desires
Leaving everything
Broken and hollow
Screaming and crying.
Alone and cold
Missing our loved ones
Grieving and mourning
Leaving us in a barren
Wasteland of devastation.
In a bubble of despair
And burning hatred for death.
Death will never stop
And everything stops for death.
Published 15th Aug 2012
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15th Aug 2012 2:01pm
the struchtur is great
i loved every word i love how u use half words
insted fo full ones it bring charictar
(i loved everyword,really i did!!)
i havent read somthing like that in a long time!! :)
i loved every word i love how u use half words
insted fo full ones it bring charictar
(i loved everyword,really i did!!)
i havent read somthing like that in a long time!! :)
15th Aug 2012 3:55pm
I like how you started with
"Death will never stop
And everything stops for death"
and ended with it
"Death will never stop
And everything stops for death"
and ended with it
15th Aug 2012 4:11pm
11th Feb 2013 10:38pm
