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Rain
I kind of like the storms
It's the only pure thing left
the rain, it just falls
It asks for nothing
It's so beautiful too
And the thunder and lightening, sometimes scares me,
but seems too right to harm
It's just a simple moment of bliss
Beauty in it's finest
I love it
I love standing in it
I love playing in it
But bitch I swear if you knock out the signal on my tv again,
while sons of anarchy is on,
we're gonna have some fucking problems
It's the only pure thing left
the rain, it just falls
It asks for nothing
It's so beautiful too
And the thunder and lightening, sometimes scares me,
but seems too right to harm
It's just a simple moment of bliss
Beauty in it's finest
I love it
I love standing in it
I love playing in it
But bitch I swear if you knock out the signal on my tv again,
while sons of anarchy is on,
we're gonna have some fucking problems
Published 11th Aug 2012
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24th Oct 2012 3:40pm
I liked it up to the end -_- I don't even own A tv.
I would love to see you write this a second time so it stays in line with the way it started.
I would love to see you write this a second time so it stays in line with the way it started.
6th Aug 2015 6:47pm
Even though this was posted years ago, I'd just like to say I really love this. Some part of me wishes that you kept the mood the same through to the ending, but I love how you caught me off guard with that. It was just so real. Nicely done.
