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Erotica Is Boring
She asked me what sex is like and how it feels
I told her it's like a meteorite crashing into the earth
A wide extinction event caused by an addition of mass
When we push the virus through our gaping pores
When we launch our children into the visible unknown
One must wonder if the human race ever actually evolved
Or if it still latches onto its neanderthal dreams
Fascinated by the fire that slowly raptures us all
I told her it's like a meteorite crashing into the earth
A wide extinction event caused by an addition of mass
When we push the virus through our gaping pores
When we launch our children into the visible unknown
One must wonder if the human race ever actually evolved
Or if it still latches onto its neanderthal dreams
Fascinated by the fire that slowly raptures us all
Published 11th Aug 2012
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2012 9:56pm
Depends on how you look at it Robert!!!
strider :)
strider :)
11th Aug 2012 10:35pm
11th Aug 2012 10:27pm
I think it depends on a (state of) mind rather than the act itself. Without a decent engine a motor vehicle will not perform well.
Thought provoking piece Robert and very interesting. :)
Thought provoking piece Robert and very interesting. :)
11th Aug 2012 10:39pm
Thanks, Mag! IT just seems that people keep popping out babies when almost every problem in the world boils down to overpopulation.
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2012 6:44am
Maybe "Overpopulation" needs "Sterilization"? I hear you, I feel you. And I like this poem:)
18th Aug 2012 7:18am
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24th Aug 2012 5:31pm
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2012 7:29pm
Hello Robert,
I can see from the comments above (some even deleted) that you are touching a nerve dude.
Well done!
This is testament, that you sir, are an artist.
Oh how boring life would be if we painted what the masses wanted to see, write what they wanted to read or sang about what they wanted to hear.
It's Kudos from me, because you have a well written piece that makes people look at themselves. Who cares if they do it with love or discontempt. The truth you did your job and you did it well!
AL -x-
I can see from the comments above (some even deleted) that you are touching a nerve dude.
Well done!
This is testament, that you sir, are an artist.
Oh how boring life would be if we painted what the masses wanted to see, write what they wanted to read or sang about what they wanted to hear.
It's Kudos from me, because you have a well written piece that makes people look at themselves. Who cares if they do it with love or discontempt. The truth you did your job and you did it well!
AL -x-
31st Aug 2012 7:36pm
This is an excellent piece Robert well done! Your point was well put across.
Red
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