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Keeping track II: These are for you
Two Years of Summed-up (and Dramatized) Male Friendships and Memories in Chronological Order
(For The Boys)
First came the stinging sweetheart prodigy
unattainable, nigh unswayable, with eyes
that lick the world down to humanity's bony fingertips
and fiction that lights a page from underneath -
Sharing similar taste in men and a lesbian
understanding, he'll always have my heart.
From first hit to the last time I saw my soul
there was a guilty lust at first write
turned a deeper connect than I had expected -
he rises always, like horizon's bloodshot eye
when he ambles back from his bombs-aways
and knows it well, though he'd never say.
Then this one, with fingers from Calliope
came sad, but strong and purposeful
rising from his circumstance, mature
and honest, recklessly romantic with
water elements that sizzled in my firelight.
He laid me hope - until I sent it back.
Then the devil bared his fangs at me
and softly as a petal landing, Artemis rolled
over his tongue with a disconcerting ease.
His general belligerence belies a most
dangerous pull, and I remain convinced:
Eloquence should not have been granted
to serpents.
And then the lyricist with chill, irresistible beat
thrusting ego through every line break/cut/take
danced me through smiles and wrote me
like a blues queen belts her red light into a room -
and we drank to laughter in song, while I
inspected the stars for those elusive inspirations.
'Bout half-time, in popped a friendly face
support through every secret confession
honesty built over grins, jabs, late night conversation
and too many cups of tea, the Aries driving him
ever onward in tireless training to hurdle over
the vigilant zoning fences; the only one who knows.
---------------
Ballads (4 liners from the Ballads thread):
-For Ray-
Light, riddled words and structure heave bricks
that fly and swoop like dragonflies,
bumping (with or without references) soundly
and blindside of one's head - the message in stars
-For Jack-
Snaps of essence in facets of the mundane,
everyday, and introspect, giving life
to moments most miss in lack of presence:
The moments that make - everything.
-For LA-
Twisting and raising braincells on high alert
for all concepts in metaphors' trails;
images blazing, colours bright, wrapping tightly,
bidding roots cling to sparkling, earthy stones.
-For PTM-
He writes with passion, intensity,
beats in eloquence and charm;
the mythical, musical notes carried,
engraved in the back of my mind.
-For Graham B.-
Abstract, makes me look twice;
moving, running sideline,
painting, with a small brush,
pictures fullest in the spaces.
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Member competition entries:
1.
"Graffiti in the shadows and a parallel universe"
(For Lightbaron)
Our naked-spirit writer
with affinity for honesty
sings of transience
on skyscraper bases
on rust belt train cars
in sundial shadows
under railway bridges
right/left brains
painting harmony
in a poet's hand
He found us here
in the storm gutter
having swept aside
the pieced parts, high caps
and past participle mindset
already attuned to the principles
and facets of karmic rebellion -
he's a hellion's own and still
a favored son of light
with words that take shape
like slow possession
of ritualistic tribal beats
compressed emotion
dancing up from gut to throat
calling hips to follow
sparkling webs
of concept
now, to find the spell
gathered from the parallels
that grew his manly beard
2.
"splinters"
i've witnessed parades of intelligent men
sonnetizing, melting into gutterbound pools
at simple flickers of the lens on her face, her curves
and her eyes that one could hold
high to heaven in the palms of his hands
so gods would bless the earth
her mouth, a perfect bow, is tied seriously shut
while a bleeding tongue, too often bitten
behind elegant fingers
drips the old poisoned leavings of wrongs
pain, Sunday
silence
there was hope there, in her eyes then
even when telling[torture] in their cherrywood and white
i wonder, now, if she's finding out what memories
hypocrisy can't cover
and i wonder if my own eyes are giving me away
3.
For Merda
this
one's
silence
is a temple
buried under eons -
yet, when words come...
they form lovingly
and reverently
as prayers
whispered
to a boding conscience
4.
For LA
(yeah, another one :)
you're a full collection
of paint filled pipe-bombs
gone off in confined spaces
-muted-
but for the blazes of pure's burn
'n colour
come up in the residue
of your explosions --
and you speak river
sustaining for blade, fur and scale
dipping currents dragging deep
under words that crash and hiss
at all them taller solids
stubbornly insisting on stasis
the weight of what may be and what may not's only
about as heavy as a bluebottle
but sings the same bloody song
and that's where your emotives' translations 'ting'
like crystal in the chaos
'cause darlin'
grit
gives just as good
as the river
5.
For Gigi
Sleepy brown eyes
lips edible plush
Daring you resist
her high heel sway
Writes gentle
knocks straight
No apology
no need
--
Safe sometimes
behind breezy smiles
Forgetful pleasure
bedroom hair/body/eyes
Hypnotic
sleepy brown eyes
(For The Boys)
First came the stinging sweetheart prodigy
unattainable, nigh unswayable, with eyes
that lick the world down to humanity's bony fingertips
and fiction that lights a page from underneath -
Sharing similar taste in men and a lesbian
understanding, he'll always have my heart.
From first hit to the last time I saw my soul
there was a guilty lust at first write
turned a deeper connect than I had expected -
he rises always, like horizon's bloodshot eye
when he ambles back from his bombs-aways
and knows it well, though he'd never say.
Then this one, with fingers from Calliope
came sad, but strong and purposeful
rising from his circumstance, mature
and honest, recklessly romantic with
water elements that sizzled in my firelight.
He laid me hope - until I sent it back.
Then the devil bared his fangs at me
and softly as a petal landing, Artemis rolled
over his tongue with a disconcerting ease.
His general belligerence belies a most
dangerous pull, and I remain convinced:
Eloquence should not have been granted
to serpents.
And then the lyricist with chill, irresistible beat
thrusting ego through every line break/cut/take
danced me through smiles and wrote me
like a blues queen belts her red light into a room -
and we drank to laughter in song, while I
inspected the stars for those elusive inspirations.
'Bout half-time, in popped a friendly face
support through every secret confession
honesty built over grins, jabs, late night conversation
and too many cups of tea, the Aries driving him
ever onward in tireless training to hurdle over
the vigilant zoning fences; the only one who knows.
---------------
Ballads (4 liners from the Ballads thread):
-For Ray-
Light, riddled words and structure heave bricks
that fly and swoop like dragonflies,
bumping (with or without references) soundly
and blindside of one's head - the message in stars
-For Jack-
Snaps of essence in facets of the mundane,
everyday, and introspect, giving life
to moments most miss in lack of presence:
The moments that make - everything.
-For LA-
Twisting and raising braincells on high alert
for all concepts in metaphors' trails;
images blazing, colours bright, wrapping tightly,
bidding roots cling to sparkling, earthy stones.
-For PTM-
He writes with passion, intensity,
beats in eloquence and charm;
the mythical, musical notes carried,
engraved in the back of my mind.
-For Graham B.-
Abstract, makes me look twice;
moving, running sideline,
painting, with a small brush,
pictures fullest in the spaces.
-----------
Member competition entries:
1.
"Graffiti in the shadows and a parallel universe"
(For Lightbaron)
Our naked-spirit writer
with affinity for honesty
sings of transience
on skyscraper bases
on rust belt train cars
in sundial shadows
under railway bridges
right/left brains
painting harmony
in a poet's hand
He found us here
in the storm gutter
having swept aside
the pieced parts, high caps
and past participle mindset
already attuned to the principles
and facets of karmic rebellion -
he's a hellion's own and still
a favored son of light
with words that take shape
like slow possession
of ritualistic tribal beats
compressed emotion
dancing up from gut to throat
calling hips to follow
sparkling webs
of concept
now, to find the spell
gathered from the parallels
that grew his manly beard
2.
"splinters"
i've witnessed parades of intelligent men
sonnetizing, melting into gutterbound pools
at simple flickers of the lens on her face, her curves
and her eyes that one could hold
high to heaven in the palms of his hands
so gods would bless the earth
her mouth, a perfect bow, is tied seriously shut
while a bleeding tongue, too often bitten
behind elegant fingers
drips the old poisoned leavings of wrongs
pain, Sunday
silence
there was hope there, in her eyes then
even when telling[torture] in their cherrywood and white
i wonder, now, if she's finding out what memories
hypocrisy can't cover
and i wonder if my own eyes are giving me away
3.
For Merda
this
one's
silence
is a temple
buried under eons -
yet, when words come...
they form lovingly
and reverently
as prayers
whispered
to a boding conscience
4.
For LA
(yeah, another one :)
you're a full collection
of paint filled pipe-bombs
gone off in confined spaces
-muted-
but for the blazes of pure's burn
'n colour
come up in the residue
of your explosions --
and you speak river
sustaining for blade, fur and scale
dipping currents dragging deep
under words that crash and hiss
at all them taller solids
stubbornly insisting on stasis
the weight of what may be and what may not's only
about as heavy as a bluebottle
but sings the same bloody song
and that's where your emotives' translations 'ting'
like crystal in the chaos
'cause darlin'
grit
gives just as good
as the river
5.
For Gigi
Sleepy brown eyes
lips edible plush
Daring you resist
her high heel sway
Writes gentle
knocks straight
No apology
no need
--
Safe sometimes
behind breezy smiles
Forgetful pleasure
bedroom hair/body/eyes
Hypnotic
sleepy brown eyes
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