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Re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 4:49pm
OH MY GOD!!!!! I absolutely love this one. I just hope there's not another kinky colonel who inspired it! Hopefully I have date of rank on him. You have me laughing, blushing, and swooning ... what playful delicious fun. Thanks Red, you made my day!
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re: Re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 4:58pm
Its for you Mark, I thought to poke some fun at you and the rank, lolol I was quite insubordinate in my day lolol So glad you enjoyed it it was meant to make you laugh.
Red
Red
re: re: Re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 5:20pm
Sounds like you still are insubordinate. Makes we want to drop you for push ups once I stop laughing and wipe my eyes clear of tears!
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7th Aug 2012 5:42pm
I'll drop.... a spank on my fanny and stick my tongue out at you! hahahahaha
The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 4:50pm
re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 5:00pm
Hahah wasn't that fun I get the giggles every time I read it. I don't do funny pieces, they don't come out so well for me but when inspiration hits, it hits.Thanks Magda for the comment.
Red
Red
re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 5:19pm
Enough all ready ... It makes me want shout "Attention!" And drop you both for push ups. I'm sure the veteran gypsy red can do it. How about you Private Magdalena ...
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re: re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 5:36pm
Re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 5:44pm
"Go home to your wife" shocked me. You dropped that line like a nuclear weapon. Your poem is finely done (lovely background), very consistent and fills this eye (mine) with wonder and wondering. The wondering is: why do you put up with him?
marcella1
marcella1
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re: Re: The Kinky Colonel
Because it is the nature of the game, the thrill of the chase between cat and mouse. Thanks for stopping by and the great comment glad you liked it.
Red
Red
Re: The Kinky Colonel
Anonymous
7th Aug 2012 6:13pm
Red
I loved this...both the poem and the comments afterwards.....naughtiness is so much fun...
Red - your poems are so good
Thank you for a terrific read
Peace
Kitty
Le Colonel....I gather you INSPIRED this...
.....bravo
I loved this...both the poem and the comments afterwards.....naughtiness is so much fun...
Red - your poems are so good
Thank you for a terrific read
Peace
Kitty
Le Colonel....I gather you INSPIRED this...
.....bravo
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re: Re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 6:27pm
hahahah He did, kind of pay backs for the Ménage à trois hahaha it was fun to write and naughtiness is absolutely fun!Thanks for the comment Kitty.
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7th Aug 2012 6:28pm
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29th Aug 2012 3:26am
Re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 11:27pm
Fun and laughter being free and fandabidozi as a remedy, your metre grows as do your friends, good to see you having fun again :)
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re: Re: The Kinky Colonel
7th Aug 2012 11:31pm
Thank you luv, I had an image of Benny Hill saluting in my mind when I wrote this, it was fun.
Red
Red
Re: The Kinky Colonel
8th Aug 2012 1:26am
re: Re: The Kinky Colonel
8th Aug 2012 1:28am
Hahahah Glad you liked it Ken, right up my alley, I love naughty but clean fun.Thanks for the comment.
Red
Red
re: all eyes on you
9th Aug 2012 12:52pm
Well Thank you that's very sweet. I am very glad you liked it and that you could feel it the way you did, that pleases me very much.Thank you for stopping by.
Gypsy Red
Gypsy Red