deepundergroundpoetry.com
The Darkest Pain
That bright yellow kid friendly color
The lead free paint
Mocks me
Your plain in sight
Yet I step on you
Immediately feel your presence
The piercing pain
Bringing me to tears
Furiously screaming at my brother
For having them out in the first place
Goddamn you Lego
Build me a Hostpital
The lead free paint
Mocks me
Your plain in sight
Yet I step on you
Immediately feel your presence
The piercing pain
Bringing me to tears
Furiously screaming at my brother
For having them out in the first place
Goddamn you Lego
Build me a Hostpital
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 5
comments 15
reads 954
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: The Darkest Pain
6th Aug 2012 4:04am
Re: The Darkest Pain
6th Aug 2012 4:06am
Re: The Darkest Pain
6th Aug 2012 4:09am
Re: The Darkest Pain
6th Aug 2012 3:40pm
Re: The Darkest Pain
6th Aug 2012 4:27pm
Re: The Darkest Pain
6th Aug 2012 4:33pm
Re: The Darkest Pain
6th Aug 2012 4:47pm
Re: The Darkest Pain
7th Aug 2012 00:12am
nice
i got a whole new idea of this poem not like others
very well indeed
i got a whole new idea of this poem not like others
very well indeed
0
Re: The Darkest Pain
7th Aug 2012 00:18am
Re: The Darkest Pain
19th Aug 2012 10:53pm
Re: The Darkest Pain
20th Aug 2012 1:09am
Re: The Darkest Pain
19th Sep 2012 9:09am
Re: The Darkest Pain
19th Sep 2012 11:03am
Re: The Darkest Pain
24th Sep 2012 9:35pm
Re: The Darkest Pain
24th Sep 2012 9:41pm