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Silent Heartbreak
You used to like me and make me laugh, now just an option and hard graft.
The fact you showed me the door, all for a common whore, that makes me hate you even more.
If I vanished into thin air, you wouldn't care, or notice I wasn't even there.
Now with this word vomit I give to you, how my heart broke into two. The caring from me is no more, I'll happily close the door.
The fact you showed me the door, all for a common whore, that makes me hate you even more.
If I vanished into thin air, you wouldn't care, or notice I wasn't even there.
Now with this word vomit I give to you, how my heart broke into two. The caring from me is no more, I'll happily close the door.
Published 4th Aug 2012
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4th Aug 2012 1:42am
Quick and raw, I really like the flow. While it finished quickly I suspect that it is not truly over. Or maybe I'm wrong and you're one of the lucky ones! As I look back on betrayals and being dumped I still get a visciral reaction though many years have passed.
4th Aug 2012 5:34am
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4th Aug 2012 3:59pm
I like this one! Good pace, Sam bro!
I wanna know the story behind it!
I wanna know the story behind it!
